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Title: The Masque of the Dead - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: Greeny (No longer active) on June 08, 2020, 12:54:14 PM
Decided to go down my own distinctly folky path after losing myself in the bliss of the Kari and Ella collaboration. It's never too far from the surface to be fair.

Started with a rhythm loop I made from Thumbjam Tabla and Timpani that I put into Garageband. Then it was acoustic guitar, bass and vocals. The mandolin-sounding part is done on guitar this time.

The Masque of the Dead

Something is coming I can sense it in the twilight
like the acrid smoke of burning stubble in the fields
rabbits in the rain and all the filigree of hedgerows
listen with your heart now that everything is still

and i can hear the dead moving their fingers
i can hear the buds bursting on the tree
papier mache faces for the buried and the living
this masque of the dead - come and see

i can see the plague carts heading for the commom
planting their seeds amongst the gorse and the birch
iron-age barrows left exposed by the fire
listen with your heart like this landscape is a church

and i can hear the dead moving their fingers
i can hear the buds bursting on the tree
papier mache faces for the buried and the living
this masque of the dead - come and see

 
Title: Re: The Masque of the Dead - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: hardlock on June 08, 2020, 03:25:12 PM
Wow! A hauntingly beautiful piece.  I really feel like I'm right there!
Title: Re: The Masque of the Dead - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: Ferryman_1957 on June 08, 2020, 04:01:22 PM
Wasn't expecting this. Spooky and macabre. Love it! Clever arrangement and a wonderful twisted agrarian feel. The guitar parts work really well and the lyrics are as always fab. Different and quite wonderful. And yet it's still got a killer melody that I am humming already.

You evoked memories of Comus here - if you haven't heard of them, Google Comus First Utterance and see what you think......
Title: Re: The Masque of the Dead - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: Oldrottenhead on June 08, 2020, 04:19:03 PM
getting a mariachi vibe from this, thinking one of the festival of the dead things ye get in Mexico. braw bro.
Title: Re: The Masque of the Dead - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: Flash Harry on June 08, 2020, 04:37:54 PM
Dark and weird and particularly fabulous
Title: Re: The Masque of the Dead - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: Redler on June 09, 2020, 12:04:25 AM
Fine Greeny Monday song, again. I must find some tutorial videos how to make and add garage band rhythm tracks onto my songs. Although, it is quite easy to make those drum tracks on MBR or BR-80, the sound isn't so real drum sound...

Great songwriting and performance, the line "i can hear the buds bursting on the tree" is pure poetry.


Ps. Thank you for the kind words of the collab.
Title: Re: The Masque of the Dead - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: Ella on June 09, 2020, 12:52:37 AM
I think you have always made wonderful music in different genres. This one is also beautiful song with a exciting elements. Like that drum and I like those little parts where mandolin-sound turns to guitar.
Title: Re: The Masque of the Dead - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: danthecoat on June 09, 2020, 02:02:07 AM
Remember i said there are certain members here that i cant wait to hear their new composition........well this :)

I just love the songs you upload here Tim and your styles are so diverse and you never know whats coming next but you can always be assured that its gonna blow you away and this is no exception. Simply fantastic !!!!!

Title: Re: The Masque of the Dead - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: AndyR on June 09, 2020, 03:41:16 AM
Woooo!

Speechless...

Only for a moment, though  ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D

This is .... nope... speechless!

It's fab - not what I'd have predicted at all. Can't think of anything else to say...

LOVE IT.
Title: Re: The Masque of the Dead - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: Mike_S on June 13, 2020, 04:11:34 PM
Brilliant work and very original. It has a real sinister olde world feel and super work on that mandolin sounding guitar. Vincent Price keeps coming into my head as I listen!

Mike
Title: Re: The Masque of the Dead - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: Blooby on June 14, 2020, 06:47:13 PM

I really dig this tune. The tremolo picking gives it that mando-zoukiish vibe (totally should be a word). Really well put together. Respectfully, I hate to admit to finding the drum intrusive in the context of this tune.

Nicely done.

Blooby
Title: Re: The Masque of the Dead - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: Hook on June 16, 2020, 08:07:30 AM
Dude!
Rock on!
Title: Re: The Masque of the Dead - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: tonyc on June 16, 2020, 12:54:41 PM
what a tune tim love the lyrics , and love the mandolin just started to play myself,  great song very interesting , cheers tony cee