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Title: A monologue of other strangers
Post by: thetworegs on April 29, 2020, 03:34:16 AM
Heres an experiment with Igor from over at alonetone he's done the backing I created the waffle hope you enjoy ......
A monologue of other strangers[Igor & Reg
Title: Re: A monologue of other strangers
Post by: danthecoat on April 29, 2020, 04:26:01 AM
This isnt working for me either here on on your jukebox :(
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Post by: Farrell Jackson on April 29, 2020, 08:04:37 AM
Couldn't get it to play Trevor.......I'm bummed cause I wanted to hear what you've done. I'll check back later.

Farrell
Title: Re: A monologue of other strangers
Post by: danthecoat on April 29, 2020, 09:31:32 AM
I liked this i like the way you did it and the accent change. Nice and experimental i like that

Well done
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Post by: Flash Harry on April 29, 2020, 10:12:00 AM
Very very cool. A riveting narrative too, this is really creative. The bloops and bleeps provide the perfect soundtrack to the odd tale, the spoken word is perfectly placed for the track, just the right amount of ambience and I liked the way the narrator moved around the soundscape.

Cracking. 
Title: Re: A monologue of other strangers
Post by: Greeny (No longer active) on April 30, 2020, 04:58:12 AM
Wow! This is different. Different in a good way. I've always like narrative songs - like 'The Gift' by Velvet Underground. This reminds me of the way John Cale delivers that. Like Mr Cale, you have an excellent voice for it. This is proper poetry! And the backing is very, very cool.
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Post by: SE on April 30, 2020, 05:13:47 AM
Wow, this is different in a good way, ever thought of taking up acting, great writing and delivery!
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Post by: tonyc on April 30, 2020, 05:37:40 AM
love it , its so different . the sound is superb , more please.......cheers tony cee
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Post by: TPB on April 30, 2020, 06:20:47 AM
Way to go out of the box brother different but very cool
Tim
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Post by: Redler on April 30, 2020, 11:23:09 AM
Really cool! There's always room for experimental stuff in my heart!
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Post by: Ferryman_1957 on May 01, 2020, 02:22:17 AM
Very cool. I love the soundscape, it's varied enough to change the mood and keep your interest throughout the whole piece. And you did a great job with the spoken words over the top. I agree with Flash, the way you move the vocals around the soundscape is very effective without just sounding like an "effect". Different, inriguing and very well done.
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Post by: Mike_S on May 02, 2020, 02:52:56 PM
Very good indeed... love the story and the slightly disturbing experimental noises underneath. Enjoyed this!

Mike