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Title: Censor Me (by Orh, Ella & Redler)
Post by: Redler on September 19, 2019, 11:15:50 AM
Hi all!

I posted a "Pixies"-vibe song on the Collab board. And here we go with vox/lyric by James and backing vocals by Päivi. Thanks James and Päivi 9{}

Recorded on Micro BR and mixed on Audacity.

Censor me
Hell they're gonna censor me
I tell the truth
With comedy

Titties n beer
Well that's okay
Tell a dirty joke
But no politic ekee


A crazy man behind the lectern
How the hell did he win an election
Building walls and ivory towers
He'll do anything to stay in power

Brown shirts black shirts
Looking for some action
Brown shirts black shirts
Causing a distraction
Title: Re: Censor Me (by Orh, Ella & Redler)
Post by: Hook on September 19, 2019, 11:23:14 AM
This is very cool, I love the interplay between ORH & Ella. Such a good track Kari. I can't believe how similar the version I wrote this morning without hearing yours at all. Superb stuff!!
Rock on!
Title: Re: Censor Me (by Orh, Ella & Redler)
Post by: Oldrottenhead on September 19, 2019, 02:16:39 PM
On the runway in Gdansk waiting to get off the plane magic mix Kari and love Ella's additions
Title: Re: Censor Me (by Orh, Ella & Redler)
Post by: cuthbert on September 20, 2019, 01:43:58 PM
Meant to comment on this earlier - fantastic backer from Kari, and great contributions from James & Päivi = a great song.

Fantastic collab!
Title: Re: Censor Me (by Orh, Ella & Redler)
Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on September 21, 2019, 09:50:07 AM
Very well done guys, excellent collaboration. Lyrically quite barbed, I like that. Good job all round.
Enjoy Gda?sk.    Willie
Title: Re: Censor Me (by Orh, Ella & Redler)
Post by: kenny mac on September 21, 2019, 11:09:45 AM
Stunning stuff ,a great collab indeed.
I'm going to have to take this on a different trip.
Hook and old rottenhead have indeed thrown down the gauntlet.
Brilliant stuff.
Title: Re: Censor Me (by Orh, Ella & Redler)
Post by: Mike_S on September 22, 2019, 02:01:53 PM
Love the grungy, dirty feel of the guitars. The vocals & lyrics are great, doesn't hold any punches. Very cool guys.

Mike
Title: Re: Censor Me (by Orh, Ella & Redler)
Post by: Romidon on September 22, 2019, 10:11:49 PM
 VERY  %)!  !!

I love going back and forth between this and Hook's virgin..  ;)

While Hook's take feels a little more filled out (like a complete song), I think orh's initial lyrics capture the mood of the song a tad more.  Listening to 'Someone Else' after hearing THIS song, I was mentally adding '..censor me..' to the melody.. :)   Thank goodness there really ISN'T that kind of censorship here!!   :o

Great job all the way around to everyone, though especially Redler in the sense that it was his music and melody that got everyone else's creative juices flowing in the first place!

romidon.
Title: Re: Censor Me (by Orh, Ella & Redler)
Post by: Ella on September 26, 2019, 01:05:51 AM
So nice energetic tune! Kari is on the run! ;) Great lyrics and vocals from the James! Love that punk-vibe they make together.
Title: Re: Censor Me (by Orh, Ella & Redler)
Post by: Ferryman_1957 on September 26, 2019, 03:47:18 AM
Loving this one, love the chunky, chuggy rhythms and simple but very effective guitar melodies. Nice grungey sound all round. Jim's vox and lyrics  fit very well with this, great job all round.
Title: Re: Censor Me (by Orh, Ella & Redler)
Post by: tonyc on October 03, 2019, 12:17:49 PM
superb collab love the change in the voices nice guitar work super stuff ,......tony cee
Title: Re: Censor Me (by Orh, Ella & Redler)
Post by: StephenM on December 17, 2020, 08:08:52 PM
What happens if Hook sang  his version of this amazing Redler backer at the same time as ORH (and Ella) did?