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Post Your Work => Original Songs => Topic started by: Flash Harry on July 31, 2019, 02:51:37 PM

Title: You Don't Know
Post by: Flash Harry on July 31, 2019, 02:51:37 PM
I started fiddling about and then I sent some stuff to OldRottenHead, who sang some words and sent me his singing

Then this happened.

You're on another wavelength
A different frequency
We both speak the same language
But you will never understand me
You don't know
You will never know
You don't know
You will never ever know
What you lack in experience
Can't be blamed on your naivety
You think that you are cultured
But that's based on hypocrisy
Wrap us all up your in flag
And make it better
Wrap it all up in a flag
And kiss it better
You don't know
You will never know
You don't know
You will never ever know
You thought that you could charm us
We surprised you with our boos
You sneaked out through the back door
With a bad case of the blues
Wrap them all up in your flag
And make it better
Wrap it all up in a flag
And kiss it better
You don't know
You will never know
You don't know
You will never ever know

Title: Re: You Don't Know
Post by: Oldrottenhead on July 31, 2019, 03:08:28 PM
Cheers Mike, I needed something to vent over  ::) ::) ;D
Title: Re: You Don't Know
Post by: Farrell Jackson on July 31, 2019, 04:06:26 PM
Excellent music and mix Flash Harry! And some cool vox and lyric ORH.... very intriguing and thought provoking .

Farrell
Title: Re: You Don't Know
Post by: TPB on August 01, 2019, 05:36:19 AM
We both speak the same language
But you will never understand me
Love the lyrics so true in some cases great vocal great music  don't need no more
Bravo
Tim
Title: Re: You Don't Know
Post by: Redler on August 01, 2019, 06:32:11 AM
I'm loving the backer, those synths sound so good! With Jim's voice and lyrics this is just amazing track. Fine job, guys!
Title: Re: You Don't Know
Post by: Hook on August 01, 2019, 08:46:23 AM
This is some rock solid awesomeness my brothers. I'm just listening on my phone speaker so I'm not hearing the bass but love what I hear. That lead guitar is excellent and ORH your vocals are outstanding. Is that Flash on the response lone in the chorus?
Rock on guys!!!
Title: Re: You Don't Know
Post by: cuthbert on August 01, 2019, 10:14:31 PM
What a beauty this is...getting a bit of a Low vibe from the synths, and another great vocal from James.

Top-notch, gents.
Title: Re: You Don't Know
Post by: Jarle on August 02, 2019, 11:50:24 AM
 Wow this is some really good pop music. I love it. Miss you both. Its time to meet again
Title: Re: You Don't Know
Post by: Flash Harry on August 02, 2019, 12:21:43 PM
I was saying just that to your brother on Wednesday. 

Too long, too long.
Title: Re: You Don't Know
Post by: kenny mac on August 03, 2019, 02:22:48 AM
Hmmm I feel another met coming  ;D
Excellent track.
Title: Re: You Don't Know
Post by: Mike_S on August 04, 2019, 06:48:56 AM
This was great really enjoyed this

Mike
Title: Re: You Don't Know
Post by: Ferryman_1957 on August 09, 2019, 10:18:29 AM
Very nice synth work here Mike. Good use of different sounds and layers, with nice percussion underneath. It could easily get a bit muddy but you didn't let this happen, it's all very atmospheric. I really like the string-y sounds on the chorus that really emphasise the melody.

Jim's vox are great, and I really like the backing vox on the chorus. Quite a juxtaposition of sharp lyrics over such a gentle backing track. A very intriguing combination.

Overall a really effective and well put together track, nice work!
Title: Re: You Don't Know
Post by: StephenM on January 03, 2021, 09:02:46 PM
i likey alot.... kind of found this on sampler jukie... kind of surprised more people don't put one on the sampler...
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