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Title: "I Don't Dream" a Hook original for DreamFest
Post by: Hook on February 23, 2018, 04:01:35 PM
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Haven't been writing or recording much of anything lately but managed to do this one over the last few days in the car. Drums are garageband, The square sine sound is from Thumbjam. Uke is my Kala Archtop & the bass is my Hadean U Bass. All recorded on The BR80.

1 rhythm uke (stereo)
1 lead uke (stereo)
1 drums (stereo)
2 U bass
1 lead vocal(stereo)
1 background vocal (stereo)
1 square sine (stereo)

I Don't Dream
written & performed by Hook
I don't dream
At least I don't remember a thing
No swirling fascinating
Colorful world that I'm creating
From the truest me
At least none that I can see

But if I did
I'm sure I'd soar with eagles in the clouds
Or rock out with a band that's way to loud

In my dream
I hope I'd  be a better me
One with fewer flaws
And longer patience
And a better outlook
On all things

I'm sure I'd soar with eagles in the clouds
Or rock out with a band that's way to loud
I'd grow my hair real long
You'd know the words to my song

I don't dream
Though I wish I did
Just to escape this life
And all its strife
And struggle I endure
Just a moment that seems pure

Title: Re: "I Don't Dream" a Hook original for DreamFest
Post by: Groundy on February 23, 2018, 11:20:48 PM
Love this one Hook,
Great sound, such a great backing you have made,
The beginning was a bit like the style of Rod Stewart's numbers.
Nice one.


Alex.
Title: Re: "I Don't Dream" a Hook original for DreamFest
Post by: kenny mac on February 24, 2018, 06:01:01 AM
Excellent hook,rock out with a band that's way too loud....that's me 😎
I remember one of the good things about the uk met was we where in a proper studio belting it out through the amps.
We really must do it again, there's slot to be said about the freedom from headphones and using the air in the room.
Brilliant
Title: Re: "I Don't Dream" a Hook original for DreamFest
Post by: bruno on February 24, 2018, 08:50:46 AM
Great tune brother - love the lyrics!
B
Title: Re: "I Don't Dream" a Hook original for DreamFest
Post by: Oldrottenhead on February 25, 2018, 12:47:23 PM
uketastic, that intro is to die for. the rest of the song is no three bad either.

keep on ukeing.
Title: Re: "I Don't Dream" a Hook original for DreamFest
Post by: Redler on February 25, 2018, 10:58:53 PM
I love that unique Hook sound!!

Those effects on uke sounds so good and square sine does the same!

Uke on!!

Title: Re: "I Don't Dream" a Hook original for DreamFest
Post by: Mach on February 26, 2018, 04:42:17 AM
Well your name is Hook for a good reason. This has a great hook and keeps the listener on the barb. Such a great vibe and melody on the vocals - terrific lyric. That sine wav is the icing here. It has the perfect pitch and fits in the song really well.

Well done,
Mach
Title: Re: "I Don't Dream" a Hook original for DreamFest
Post by: Ella on February 26, 2018, 12:13:12 PM
Lovely lyrics Hook! Great performing. Great vocals and I like those instrumental-parts also a lot!
Title: Re: "I Don't Dream" a Hook original for DreamFest
Post by: Mike_S on February 26, 2018, 01:09:36 PM
great sound from the uke. Lovely little track Hook with strong lyrics as usual.

Mike
Title: Re: "I Don't Dream" a Hook original for DreamFest
Post by: cuthbert on February 26, 2018, 04:03:34 PM
Sorry, getting to this one a bit late. Cool, funky, dreamy tune, Mr. Hook!
Title: Re: "I Don't Dream" a Hook original for DreamFest
Post by: SE on February 27, 2018, 07:13:26 AM
Great uke rythm keeps it all moving along great, nice little  synth break too, cool stuff, loved it!
Title: Re: "I Don't Dream" a Hook original for DreamFest
Post by: Bluesberry on March 04, 2018, 10:28:03 AM
Spectacular Hook...thats a groove
Title: Re: "I Don't Dream" a Hook original for DreamFest
Post by: guitarron on March 05, 2018, 03:22:40 PM
Quote from: Bluesberry on March 04, 2018, 10:28:03 AMSpectacular Hook...thats a groove
i missed this one
nicely constructed
got to get a uke
Title: Re: "I Don't Dream" a Hook original for DreamFest
Post by: Blooby on March 05, 2018, 05:58:49 PM
I know I've been away for a bit, but it sounds like you've upped your game production-wise. You have your own thing going here, and I'm digging it.

Blooby
Title: Re: "I Don't Dream" a Hook original for DreamFest
Post by: StephenM on July 31, 2021, 11:28:25 PM
I really haven't been bumpin much lately so if tonight I do a bit extra I'm gonna live with it...

really love this one Hook... found it digging through the sampler juke boxes...lots of great stuff on those...

this is a great track...
Title: Re: "I Don't Dream" a Hook original for DreamFest
Post by: tonyc on August 01, 2021, 02:02:14 AM
great song hook . love the uke , superb vocal ,cool very catchy song great listen ......tony cee
Title: Re: "I Don't Dream" a Hook original for DreamFest
Post by: Zoltan on August 01, 2021, 03:21:18 AM
Now i'm hooked! The song is a dream. I like the bouncy feel, and the swirly sounds. It's almost like being in the clouds. The instrumentation is great, and the synth sound compliments the more organic sounds beautifully. The song rolls nicely along and invites the listener for a ride.

The song reminded me of lots of things, and weirdly it also reminded me of Dinosaur Jr. (the poppiness, not the fuzz!). For me this feels like the 90's.