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Title: Neverland - alternative rock song
Post by: MoreMuSic on September 30, 2016, 09:29:12 AM
Dear friends,

here comes a new song "Neverland" - guitars are tuned two half steps down to Drop D

https://soundcloud.com/meyerhofer-1-1/neverland

Neverland (103bpm)

G                G                 C                        C
Peter took Wendy to show her the Universe
G               G                  C                       C 
The moons were shining beside the Jupiter
Em                               Em
The lost boys were dancing till the morn
Em                             Em
They call the spirits to be born
C                               C               Dm
Somewhere, somewhere in Neverland

G                G                 C                        C
Bonnie loved Clyde till the day she died
G                G                 C                        C
The night sealed their fate, to loose her mate
Em                               Em
Her heart was left in tears to drown
Em                               Em
When 50 bullets stroke them down
C                               C               Dm
Somewhere, somewhere in Neverland

Those stories has been told 
Still their magic is to behold
Its written in my face
Not to stay at the same old place.
my heart is in Neverland
let the dull world stay young
i will see you, somewhere in Neverland-....



Hope you like it  ;)

Sven
Title: Re: Neverland - alternative rock song
Post by: Groundy on September 30, 2016, 12:50:35 PM
Brilliant Sven, really enjoyed it,
Love the intro,
Well done......
Alex
Title: Re: Neverland - alternative rock song
Post by: Farrell Jackson on September 30, 2016, 01:06:09 PM
Very good song and story line Sven. I really like the ambience that you've created with the guitars!

Farrell
Title: Re: Neverland - alternative rock song
Post by: Redler on September 30, 2016, 11:29:20 PM
Fine job! I'm on the second listening and this is a catchy song! Good tones and well sung!
Title: Re: Neverland - alternative rock song
Post by: leighelse on October 02, 2016, 12:23:25 AM
This is a delightful story/song. I like the lead guitar and the vocals particularly.

... and I love your accent!
Title: Re: Neverland - alternative rock song
Post by: MoreMuSic on October 02, 2016, 01:06:40 AM
dear friends,

thank you for your comments - yes, "sorry" for my accent  :D .
For native speakers it must be a little bit exhausting.

Sven
Title: Re: Neverland - alternative rock song
Post by: Johnny Robbo on October 02, 2016, 03:09:25 AM
Beautiful... an truly excellent song, recorded & produced to a really pro standard. Looking forward to hearing much more from you!