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Post Your Work => Original Songs => Topic started by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on March 15, 2016, 10:41:19 AM

Title: You Don't Know
Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on March 15, 2016, 10:41:19 AM
Hi all, I'm afraid I'm another one thats a bit lacking in attendance at the moment. Mrs Willie has just retired and wants to go places and do things which means my playtime is a bit shorter than I would wish although it is a pleasure having her to myself again. Anyway, a bit of a rush job while she's driven into town to meet some friends. I hope you enjoy.
Regards Willie

Sometimes you gotta take the rough with the smooth
Sometimes you'll be winning, sometimes you're gonna lose

You don't know, you don't know, you don't know
What's coming on
You don't know, you don't know, you don't know
What's going wrong

Sometimes you gotta take the road in your stride
Sometimes when you're lucky you're gonna get a ride

You don't know, you don't know, you don't know
What's coming on
You don't know, you don't know, you don't know
What's going wrong

Sometimes it breaks my heart when I think of you
Sometimes it's back to the beginning and start anew.

Instrumental

Verse Two, Chorus, Outro


Title: Re: You Don't Know
Post by: Farrell Jackson on March 15, 2016, 11:23:03 AM
I completely understand where you're at with Mrs. Willie retiring...my Mrs. Jackson retired last year. It does require some shuffling of priorities but trust me it does settle down after a while in a good way.

On to the song: I like this country rock style with the philosophical lyric. You are doing some excellent vocals and guitar work here. I like how you used the backing vox to transition seamlessly into the bridge. Well done Willie!

Farrell
Title: Re: You Don't Know
Post by: Groundy on March 15, 2016, 01:19:15 PM
 I too understand the retirement bit, I retired a couple of years ago, and thought I would have loads of time for music,
WRONG..... ;D
This is another hit for me Willie, you are a music machine.
Well done....Alex
Title: Re: You Don't Know
Post by: Hook on March 16, 2016, 04:40:03 AM
Very nice tune, you got to steal those moments brother. Time we'll spent.
Rock on!
Title: Re: You Don't Know
Post by: kenny mac on March 16, 2016, 06:23:43 AM
Wow nice one willie,sometimes the best songs come out when we are under pressure from time constraints etc.
Love the backing vocals on this.
Well done
Title: Re: You Don't Know
Post by: Oldrottenhead on March 16, 2016, 06:55:13 AM
playing catch up, the first note of this nearly blew me off my seat it was so much louder than the song i was listening to previously.
certainly caught my attention. shades of neil diamond in the vocals.

braw willie, there is plenty of voluntary work your wife could be doing, start dropping hints.  ;D ;D ;D
Title: Re: You Don't Know
Post by: Pine on March 16, 2016, 08:03:06 AM
True words indeed Willie. Ya just never know what's around the bend.

Always enjoy listening to you sing...i like your vocal tone and your phrasing.

My wife just went to working part time..nice to be able to do more things together. It takes some adjusting tho...

All in all, a good tune here Willie. Loved the message. Nice post.
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