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Title: "Jam" AlachuaMET2015
Post by: Hook on December 29, 2015, 04:36:10 AM
AlachuaMET2015 (banner image missing)


Musically this is a completely improvised piece, Blooby on guitar an myself on dulcimer. I had the lyrics but improvised the melody.

Jam
written & performed by Blooby & Hook
AlachuaMET2015
Looking through sad eyes
amazed at how time flies
slips away so quickly
leaves me empty and reserved
if I could slip in and out
a chameleon that never doubts
instead of this that I've become
how did I grow so numb

Forgetting fast what it means
how could I have slipped
between the lines that always define
Some sort of moral code
but gray is the only color I see
and everything is too slippery to hold

Fickle is the only way
to accurately describe
but the words I choose aren't accurate
and seldom are they kind
Blunt, direct and to the point
Matter of fact I like to say
If your suit of skin is weak
Then hurtful they might be

Title: Re: "Jam" AlachuaMET2015
Post by: Johnny Robbo on December 29, 2015, 06:29:33 AM
... and another brilliant piece of work from you lads. I've had a great time sat here eating my lunch catching up on all the great work you've posted since I was last here. Keep it up, lads :)
Title: Re: "Jam" AlachuaMET2015
Post by: Oldrottenhead on December 29, 2015, 07:28:19 AM
met on! magic.
Title: Re: "Jam" AlachuaMET2015
Post by: cuthbert on December 29, 2015, 02:45:10 PM
Loved it - the intricate guitar and dulcimer and tempo changes give it a real Eastern quality that I totally dig.

MET on!
Title: Re: "Jam" AlachuaMET2015
Post by: bruno on December 29, 2015, 04:01:10 PM
Musically this is really very Indian in nature, the rich strumming and the dulcimer sounds like a sitar. Lots of eastern scales as well - love it. A very fruitful few days - well done guys. I am extremely jealous :-)
B
Title: Re: "Jam" AlachuaMET2015
Post by: kenny mac on December 29, 2015, 04:33:24 PM
Brilliant stuff guys,I love the clarity of this,the best thing about this site is the Mets that be apeared.
Magic.