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Post Your Work => Original Songs => Topic started by: Kostiainen on October 25, 2015, 11:12:58 AM

Title: Blaah, syksy on ankeaa
Post by: Kostiainen on October 25, 2015, 11:12:58 AM
Hello. New song again. Still Finnish, my english EP is not ready yet.

This is autumn song.

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And poor translation:

Blaah, Autumn Is Bleak

Autumn always depress
Summer traces lose
Tree leaves to yellow
Until the greyness wins

I say blah
Autumn is bleak
And soon again
Winter is coming

Autumn always irritates
Weather forcibly cools
Wind outdoor freezing
Must stay warm inside

I say blah
Autumn is bleak
And soon again
Winter is coming

The lawn will never dry
At night ground freezing
In the morning I slip with Crocs
And I will curse season

I say blah
Autumn is bleak
And soon again
Winter is coming



Title: Re: Blaah, syksy on ankeaa
Post by: Pipes on October 29, 2015, 11:13:00 AM
Hello,

This has an Oriental feeling, I feel :)

Thanks for posting:)

Keep it up.

Nick G
Title: Re: Blaah, syksy on ankeaa
Post by: SwanSong on October 29, 2015, 05:50:56 PM
I Agree oriental feel to it . but it works well with the subject matter
nice vocals. just felt u could have more volume in the mix. as u do
have good quality ..either way enjoyed my listen cheers NEIL !!