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Post Your Work => Original Songs => Topic started by: sing? on October 11, 2015, 04:37:17 PM

Title: Original Song
Post by: sing? on October 11, 2015, 04:37:17 PM
Hello again to the people at Songcrafters,

I haven't thought of a name for this one. There are two guitar tracks bass and drums. There are certain things I like about it but I'm not sure how good it is.

Nick
Title: Re: Original Song
Post by: Hook on October 11, 2015, 07:00:19 PM
I really like it too, was it 9min. long. I'm on my iPad and sometimes it starts over in the middle of the tune but usually won't end and I heard the ending for sure. That's not a critique because I didn't notice I was just jamming. The only thing that I might reconsider is your staccato praise endings in what feels like a chorus to me, I want the strings to ring there. there was a 3rd or 4th section I really dug, slightly faster/complex picking pattern. Toss in some lead lines, slide maybe or horns or an oboe...cool tune.
Rock on!
Title: Re: Original Song
Post by: Groundy on October 17, 2015, 11:51:50 PM
Nice one Nick, good sound.
Gavdos would be a good name for it....
Well done..

Alex
Title: Re: Original Song
Post by: Groundy on October 17, 2015, 11:52:02 PM
Nice one Nick, good sound.
"Gavdos"  would be a good name for it....
Well done..

Alex
Title: Re: Original Song
Post by: Johnny Robbo on October 18, 2015, 05:02:38 AM
You definitely have something here. It (perhaps) could do with a little more polish - tightening up the timing here and there. Also, the drums could do with being a bit "stronger" sounding. Other than that, I'd say it's a winner - you have a great melodic sense which is apparent in this. A really enjoyable piece :)
Title: Re: Original Song
Post by: SwanSong on October 18, 2015, 12:47:38 PM
I LIKE the sound for sure. well constructed . has that
60s instrumental sound well done . cheers NEIL