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Title: "I Cause The Tears" a Hook & The Barn Dance Revival
Post by: Hook on September 11, 2015, 05:30:33 AM
CountryWestern (banner image missing)


I love it when the fests I don't vote for prove to be the most inspiring. The boys and I put this together over the last few days in the car , except the u-bass. That needed to go through the pre amp.
1 baritone uke/vocal (stereo)
1 drums (garageband)
1 U-bass
1 harmonica (that 's really me)
1 pedal steel (thumbjam)

I cause The Tears
written & performed by Hook
When you said goodbye I didn't know
exactly what that meant
Forever was just a word
and I had never heard of permanent

Never was concerned whether it was real
Probably wouldn't recognize how a broken heart feels
I was always the heel
I cause the tears

When you said goodbye I didn't know
exactly what tomorrow would bring
But the pain and sorrow grew
so much bigger than you could ever know
And it still grows

I cause the tears
I've wasted so many years
when I drink too many beers
I cause the tears
Title: Re: "I Cause The Tears" a Hook & The Barn Dance Revival
Post by: tonyc on September 11, 2015, 09:19:29 AM
nice song your voice sounds great , love the lyrics.  posted by tonyc
Title: Re: "I Cause The Tears" a Hook & The Barn Dance Revival
Post by: Kenneth on September 11, 2015, 09:25:29 AM
well written song. You captured the feel , and the pedal steel sounds so cool. I know nothing about Country music, but I like this one (and the few i've heard at this site)
Nice job Hook.
Title: Re: "I Cause The Tears" a Hook & The Barn Dance Revival
Post by: bruno on September 11, 2015, 11:57:14 AM
Brother - you are on fire at the moment. Listened to this earlier. Super harp playing - great laid back feel on this. Late night music at its best.
B
Title: Re: "I Cause The Tears" a Hook & The Barn Dance Revival
Post by: Johnny Robbo on September 12, 2015, 01:20:02 AM
Lovely stuff... great lyrics & superb C&W production values. That lonesome pedal steel is absolutely gorgeous!
Title: Re: "I Cause The Tears" a Hook & The Barn Dance Revival
Post by: Blooby on September 12, 2015, 06:25:12 AM

Wow, that pedal steel was a great call. You did a great job of implementing it subtly. Great harp as well. Cracker of a track. Wonderful job with the arrangement on this.

Blooby
Title: Re: "I Cause The Tears" a Hook & The Barn Dance Revival
Post by: Oldrottenhead on September 12, 2015, 06:27:47 AM
bloody magic! very reminiscent of lambchop. laid back heaven.
Title: Re: "I Cause The Tears" a Hook & The Barn Dance Revival
Post by: fenderbender on September 12, 2015, 11:18:47 AM
Great steel sound
great lyrics on this one  8) 8) 8) 8)
Great vocals -great country song



Tommy
Title: Re: "I Cause The Tears" a Hook & The Barn Dance Revival
Post by: Ella on September 12, 2015, 01:23:18 PM
Ah. Wonderful tune! Your voice sounds so beautiful and warm. Loved that harp too.
Title: Re: "I Cause The Tears" a Hook & The Barn Dance Revival
Post by: SwanSong on September 12, 2015, 06:33:18 PM
Very beautiful Hook and Inspirational all of your songs are
so magical along with your wonderful vocals cheers NEIL !
Title: Re: "I Cause The Tears" a Hook & The Barn Dance Revival
Post by: ODH on September 14, 2015, 05:19:49 AM
Very well done.  Lovely song and great performance / recording / production.

Pedal Steel & C&W-fest are a match made in heaven, turns out.

Quote from: Hook on September 11, 2015, 05:30:33 AMThe boys and I put this together over the last few days in the car

How does your wife feel about you spending days at a time in the car with the boys?