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Title: "My gun" a Geir original
Post by: Geir on September 27, 2014, 07:58:59 AM
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(http://cdn.theatlantic.com/static/newsroom/img/mag/2011/09/winkler/lead.jpg?n1926s)
My gun
w/m: Geir
Jasmine acoustic
MiM Tele for slide
Ibanes GSR200 bass
Galileo organ (iPad)
Drums played on pads in DrumJam
Recorded mixed and mastered on BR80
No cries
No lies
you turn
a blind eye
I point my gun at you
and you point yours at me

dead end
my friend
You point your gun at me
and I point mine at you

       Why are you still standing on that hill
         Surrounded by the forces of someone's will

waste time
waste land
a slight movement
of a hand
We point our guns at you
and you point yours at them

31
no point
In running
They point their guns at us
and the circle's complete

       Why are you still standing on that hill
         Surrounded by the forces of someone's will

A crack
In a wall
Will end
It all
move one step forward
and then two steps back

Hot war
Cold war
move two step forward
and you'll break your back

     slowly you will see
      where to be..... Safe


a war
is a war
as long
as you want
you will see your way
and I'll see my

so far
no longer
will I see it your way
when you don't want to see it mine

       Why are you still standing on that hill
         Surrounded by the forces of someone's will

Hot war
No more?
Cold war
No more?
Hot war
No more?
Cold war .......
Title: Re: "My gun" a Geir original
Post by: Oldrottenhead on September 27, 2014, 11:32:56 AM
I had to download this to my phone in order to hear it. Had my earbuds in. The. Spoken intro gave a false sense of security that this was gonna be a nice laidback song. Then bang! You about scared me to death. Bloody loved it.
Title: Re: "My gun" a Geir original
Post by: Flash Harry on September 27, 2014, 01:37:41 PM
Fab. Like James, I was expecting a gentle opening phrase, but bam! No chance.

A great rocker, organ and  electric guitar  work so well.


Love it.
Title: Re: "My gun" a Geir original
Post by: kenny mac on September 27, 2014, 03:03:31 PM
Magic,and I heard it all the way through with the iPad iOS 8 download :)
Possibly one of my favourites vocally from you.
Nice one Geir .
Title: Re: "My gun" a Geir original
Post by: SE on September 27, 2014, 04:13:30 PM
Cracking acoustic rocker,love,in the Hammond sound too, but the song and the vox are the real stand out,magic!!
Title: Re: "My gun" a Geir original
Post by: Redler on September 28, 2014, 08:58:49 AM
One word; magic tune again!!!! That organ is just amazing! Top notch job all around!
Title: Re: "My gun" a Geir original
Post by: Groundy on September 28, 2014, 11:18:52 PM
Love evrything about this Geir.
The Vox, The organ, The Production.

Top Shelf material my friend..

Alex
Title: Re: "My gun" a Geir original
Post by: Greeny (No longer active) on September 29, 2014, 03:25:37 AM
So tuneful, and so many beautiful details. The organ is fab, but I especially love those bluesy acoustic licks in the far left / right channels. Superb work (again) my friend. Would love to jam this one with you and the guys. What a beauty.
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Post by: Hook on September 29, 2014, 06:07:53 AM
Listened to this the other day on phone & was blown away but on better speakers to day & WOW. Brotherman this is outrageously good tunage. I dig everything in this and it all mixes together brilliantly, well done.
Rock the fest On!
Title: Re: "My gun" a Geir original
Post by: Jarle on September 30, 2014, 11:41:43 AM
Cool song Geir. Nice drumming.

Quote from: Greeny on September 29, 2014, 03:25:37 AM... Would love to jam this one with you and the guys...

That would be great.
Title: Re: "My gun" a Geir original
Post by: phantasm777 on September 30, 2014, 06:26:55 PM
very cool geir! i love that organ!
Title: Re: "My gun" a Geir original
Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on October 01, 2014, 03:41:43 AM
Great little mover Geir, enjoyed the mix on this, but then I do on all your stuff.  Top notch Willie
Title: Re: "My gun" a Geir original
Post by: chapperz66 on October 01, 2014, 06:23:26 AM
Marvelous stuff.  What a great song - as usual.

Paul
Title: Re: "My gun" a Geir original
Post by: MrBud on October 02, 2014, 07:47:30 AM
Dig that organ :] ! Great mix ---
Title: Re: "My gun" a Geir original
Post by: Farrell Jackson on October 03, 2014, 08:06:58 AM
Excellent song Geir! I also like the picture that goes with the song. The IPAD organ sound is amazingly good. Fine words and vocal performance....I like it all!

Farrell
Title: Re: "My gun" a Geir original
Post by: Groundy on September 26, 2017, 08:55:52 PM
OTD bump,
Nice one Geir.

Alex
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Post by: Johnny Robbo on September 28, 2017, 01:01:29 AM
Great work, Geir! Loving that sweaty Hammond organ sound... it adds just the right amount of menace to the overall sound :)