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Title: Wont Ever Run..Original by NeilSwanson.Vocals David Cooper cp2013
Post by: SwanSong on August 13, 2014, 06:25:47 PM
HI Everyone. well last week I took another fall and had to go to
hospital . for the whole week. back home now . but will need neck
surgery in about 3 weeks .3 rd surgery for neck upcoming in September
lousy year so far fallen 3 time s. but the surgeon feels the neck is the culprit
causing weakness and all . so . hope for the best.

Anyway this song another original of mine was sitting for a few months .and my
new friend DAVID COOPER. .from upper ENGLAND. .collaborated with me . and did
the lyrics vocals. and the guitar interlude. i m very impressed of the outcome .I hope
all of you r and thanks ahead of time for well wishes and prayers.  cheers NEIL AND DAVID COOPER
Title: Re: Wont Ever Run..Original by NeilSwanson.Vocals David Cooper cp2013
Post by: allysonmarie on August 13, 2014, 07:04:02 PM
So sorry to hear about your fall. I hope all goes well with your next procedure.Great work on this song. I like how the rhythm does actually grab your attention/focus to be drawn right into the story. And I like the arrangement of the vocals in closing. 
Title: Re: Wont Ever Run..Original by NeilSwanson.Vocals David Cooper cp2013
Post by: SwanSong on August 13, 2014, 07:43:54 PM
Thanks ALlysonmarie. ever so much your kind words and appreciation
of the song glad u enjoyed it wish u the best thanks again NEIL.!!
Title: Re: Wont Ever Run..Original by NeilSwanson.Vocals David Cooper cp2013
Post by: Redler on August 14, 2014, 12:01:28 AM
Cool grooving 50's stuff with 21th century production! Well done by both of you!

All the best to you! I hope the health issues are over soon.
Title: Re: Wont Ever Run..Original by NeilSwanson.Vocals David Cooper cp2013
Post by: SwanSong on August 14, 2014, 01:20:47 PM
Thanks Redler so kind of you glad u enjoyed this track
thanks NEIL AND DAVE.!
Title: Re: Wont Ever Run..Original by NeilSwanson.Vocals David Cooper cp2013
Post by: Hook on August 16, 2014, 05:55:46 AM
Really cool, 50's style rocker. Really like the vocal a lot & the track  is really well produced, well done my brother. Sorry to her about your troubles, I'll say a prayer my friend!
Rock On!
Title: Re: Wont Ever Run..Original by NeilSwanson.Vocals David Cooper cp2013
Post by: SwanSong on August 16, 2014, 03:20:25 PM
Thanks Hook ever so much glad u
enjoyed it CHEERS NEIL  !!
Title: Re: Wont Ever Run..Original by NeilSwanson.Vocals David Cooper cp2013
Post by: Farrell Jackson on August 18, 2014, 09:11:42 AM
A good one Neil and David! I like the 50's sound of this. I hope all goes well for you with the neck procedure Neil....here's to a speedy recovery!

Farrell
Title: Re: Wont Ever Run..Original by NeilSwanson.Vocals David Cooper cp2013
Post by: SwanSong on August 18, 2014, 06:09:00 PM
Hi Farrell thanks ever so much nice to hear
from you . thanks so much cheers NEIL.!
Title: Re: Wont Ever Run..Original by NeilSwanson.Vocals David Cooper cp2013
Post by: Groundy on August 18, 2014, 11:57:42 PM
Its a cracker Neil, as the others have said love the 50s vibe, sorry to hear about your fasll, take care my friend.......Alex
Title: Re: Wont Ever Run..Original by NeilSwanson.Vocals David Cooper cp2013
Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on August 21, 2014, 08:30:56 AM
Hi Neil, firstly good luck with your health problems Sheila (my wife) and I wish you all the very best. Great song, had my feet tapping along and your singer did a fine job.   Willie
Title: Re: Wont Ever Run..Original by NeilSwanson.Vocals David Cooper cp2013
Post by: Jarle on August 23, 2014, 06:05:10 AM
Wish you well.

Enjoyed the song. Made my foot tapping.
Title: Re: Wont Ever Run..Original by NeilSwanson.Vocals David Cooper cp2013
Post by: SwanSong on August 23, 2014, 05:34:00 PM
Thanks Jarle Willie and Groundy we both appreciate
the kind words . wish u the best and thanks for the
well wishes cheers NEIL.!!
Title: Re: Wont Ever Run..Original by NeilSwanson.Vocals David Cooper cp2013
Post by: bruno on August 24, 2014, 06:05:57 AM
Sorry to hear that Neil, sounds like a run of back luck.
Would agree that this is a 50's style rocker - excellent collab, great stuff.
B
Title: Re: Wont Ever Run..Original by NeilSwanson.Vocals David Cooper cp2013
Post by: Pete C on August 24, 2014, 01:03:11 PM
Good song Neil and well produced as always !  I'm getting more of a mid 1970's feeling with this.

Sorry to hear about your fall and hope everything goes well

Pete
Title: Re: Wont Ever Run..Original by NeilSwanson.Vocals David Cooper cp2013
Post by: Ella on August 25, 2014, 12:09:14 PM
Very nice! I like that rhythm and soft voice. Hope you are ok now.
Title: Re: Wont Ever Run..Original by NeilSwanson.Vocals David Cooper cp2013
Post by: SwanSong on August 25, 2014, 07:06:45 PM
Thanks Ella Pete and Bruno and anyone else I
might have missed thanks for enjoying and the
well wishes . surgery looks like mid September
now. again im greatful cheers NEIL.!!
Title: Re: Wont Ever Run..Original by NeilSwanson.Vocals David Cooper cp2013
Post by: chapperz66 on August 26, 2014, 03:34:24 AM
Get well soon Neil.

The laid back vocals work really well against the chugging rhythm.  Great listen.

Paul
Title: Re: Wont Ever Run..Original by NeilSwanson.Vocals David Cooper cp2013
Post by: SwanSong on August 26, 2014, 03:16:25 PM
Thanks so much for the well wishes
appreciate the support wish you the
best NEIL.!!
Title: Re: Wont Ever Run..Original by NeilSwanson.Vocals David Cooper cp2013
Post by: Groundy on December 24, 2014, 11:42:56 PM
Bump....
Thinking of you Neil, Hope you have a good Christmas....All the best......Alex