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Title: "Lost Thought" .. Satchwood original
Post by: Satchwood on April 10, 2014, 03:59:10 PM
[reverbnation]13287045[/reverbnation]

Not sure if i posted this original tune... but my focus is back on it to complete it.
What do you think?
Title: Re: "Lost Thought" .. Satchwood original
Post by: Geir on April 10, 2014, 04:10:50 PM
Ahhhhh very NICE !!!!!

GREAT tune Tommy !
Title: Re: "Lost Thought" .. Satchwood original
Post by: Satchwood on April 10, 2014, 04:16:18 PM
Thank you Geir!!   It need a bit more verses to complete.  Thanks for listening!!
Title: Re: "Lost Thought" .. Satchwood original
Post by: Hook on April 10, 2014, 08:39:25 PM
I dig it a lot. I could see you extending it but I think it works very well as is.
Rock On!
Title: Re: "Lost Thought" .. Satchwood original
Post by: Hilary on April 11, 2014, 07:34:44 AM
I thought it was really well done . . . :D
Title: Re: "Lost Thought" .. Satchwood original
Post by: Nelson on April 11, 2014, 09:10:55 AM
Funny how you don't hear someone for a while
and you tend to forget just how fuckin good they are.

Tommy you're still kick'n ass and taking names, eh?. 

The piece is smoking, as is.

Go for it.

Title: Re: "Lost Thought" .. Satchwood original
Post by: Bluesberry on April 11, 2014, 10:05:20 AM
Beautiful.......Thats how to lay it down.......majestic solos full of emotional depth, just as many notes as needed to say what needed to be said.....I have this one looping........thats a crystal clear production for so much going on, damn near perfect.  Nice to hear a new one from you Tommy.
Title: Re: "Lost Thought" .. Satchwood original
Post by: Satchwood on April 11, 2014, 03:53:23 PM
Thank you Hilary!! Wow you guys are great!!  i mean really great!!  Nelson and Bluesberry!! Simply GREAT!!!
Title: Re: "Lost Thought" .. Satchwood original
Post by: SwanSong on April 11, 2014, 04:54:10 PM
A well done song. great dynamics . marvelous vocal and
music ........................just super . !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NEIL.1
Title: Re: "Lost Thought" .. Satchwood original
Post by: Gnasty on April 11, 2014, 05:28:01 PM


Tommygun is back! Very cool tunage buddy! It`s been a while but glad you`re still rocking!
Title: Re: "Lost Thought" .. Satchwood original
Post by: Flash Harry on April 12, 2014, 01:48:40 PM
wow! high energy stuff, everything is off the map, great guitars - but what else would we expect from you Tommy? The bass and drums are fantastic and the vocal is imaginative and inventive. I love the feel, twisted rock.

Yep - this is great.
Title: Re: "Lost Thought" .. Satchwood original
Post by: henwrench on April 12, 2014, 04:06:27 PM
Quote from: Nelson on April 11, 2014, 09:10:55 AMFunny how you don't hear someone for a while
and you tend to forget just how fuckin good they are.


          That's it, right there, Nelson got it in one.

                 The original Desert Rat Space Cowboy. Ladies and Germs, I give you...Tommy Satchwood.

                                                        henwrench
Title: Re: "Lost Thought" .. Satchwood original
Post by: Speed Demon on April 13, 2014, 01:31:56 PM
A killer rocker! Smoking guitar work and vocal.

Tommy, you are The Man!

Well done!
Title: Re: "Lost Thought" .. Satchwood original
Post by: Satchwood on April 13, 2014, 02:52:23 PM
I love you all !!!   and i'm glad to be welcomed back to the fold !!!
Title: Re: "Lost Thought" .. Satchwood original
Post by: Satchwood on April 16, 2014, 05:16:30 PM
I must say i love this site!!  And i love the site admins!! Because i've posted on many sites, right? ... including Reverbnation, Myspace, Facebook, etc... and i've gotten ALOT of plays, but...big BUT... like hardly any comments. 

This site i've received constructive criticism, bravos, pictures, emotions, aprende, excellent feedback, suggestions, mojo, examples, learning, teaching, love, kudos, and so much more!  This site is ALIVE.!.!.!.
Title: Re: "Lost Thought" .. Satchwood original
Post by: Jarle on April 18, 2014, 05:11:47 AM
A real rocker. Fabulous guitar work.
Title: Re: "Lost Thought" .. Satchwood original
Post by: Ferryman on April 18, 2014, 12:37:46 PM
Wow Tommy, it's great to hear your work again! Fabulous song, I like the really rocking rhythm and your slightly restrained lead work is really good. Some fantastic sounds and great divebombs and other tricks. The vocal is really great, love what you are doing with that, nice guttural effect.

The song dynamics are really good, some nice changes in feel, I love the way it all punches together at about 1:13. And what about the bass? That's really cool as well, I can see I'm out of a job....;-)

One big criticism - TOO SHORT!!!! More verses please!