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Post Your Work => Original Songs => Topic started by: Jarle on February 03, 2014, 12:57:36 PM

Title: The Tree of Tranquility a Jarle original.
Post by: Jarle on February 03, 2014, 12:57:36 PM
Here is another song about a special tree.  :)

The Tree of Tranquility
W/M - Jarle
Acoustic guitars, GB-bass and piano and vocal - Jarle
Listen to the sound of the breeze.
The snowflakes dancing.
Dilute the salt stains on my cheek.

Sit down by the tree of tranquility. x2

Looking at the traces in the bark.
There are no footprints.
Where they used to be before.

Sit down by the tree of tranquility. x2

Feel the wind against the skin.
Coldness is creeping in.
The water freezing once again.

Sit down by the tree of tranquility. x4
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Post by: Geir on February 03, 2014, 01:13:24 PM
Wow! This is fabulous !!

Love the guitar playing, and the production is absolutely stunning! You haven't got a new guitar? New strings maybe ? Either way is sounds fantastic. Love the melody too.

My new favourite of yours!

Well done brother
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Post by: Hilary on February 03, 2014, 01:39:46 PM
Oh it's my favourite too - a special song for a special tree . . .
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Post by: danieldesete on February 03, 2014, 01:47:33 PM
Nice ballad , I got hooked at the first note, must be the tone of those guitars. Great singing too. I love the way you take your time playing, breathing,  it goes very well with the lyrics.
keep them coming
Daniel
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Post by: steelguitar on February 03, 2014, 02:02:34 PM
Beautyfull ballad

Seems you play a 12 string guitar or a middle age stringed instrument ;D!

Great vocals with superb phrasing, high quality production sounds

Jean-Sébastien
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Post by: SwanSong on February 03, 2014, 03:26:11 PM
What a great tune. and great subject material..in my opinion
this is one of your best.s great guitar work and lryics are out
standing. everything flowed so well and peacefully . 2 thumbs
up congrats NEIL.!
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Post by: Flash Harry on February 03, 2014, 04:12:03 PM
Magic Jarle, I love this style of music.

Poignant lyric and I particularly like the way it returns to the musical theme.

Brilliant.
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Post by: Oldrottenhead on February 03, 2014, 04:37:31 PM
way too guid my viking friend
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Post by: Picker on February 03, 2014, 07:29:27 PM
Nice one.  Good melody, good singing!
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Post by: Hook on February 03, 2014, 07:38:13 PM
Braw tune  brother man!
Rock On!
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Post by: kenny mac on February 03, 2014, 07:41:23 PM
Makes me want to Sit down by the tree of tranquility ;D.
A cool vibe my friend and a relaxing tune as we'll.
Nice one.
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Post by: Groundy on February 03, 2014, 11:00:28 PM
Superb Jarle, on my 3rd listen...........Alex
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Post by: danieldesete on February 04, 2014, 02:09:47 PM
I was back for more, great tune !
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Post by: Redler on February 05, 2014, 01:13:41 AM
This is epic, Jarle! Great composition (very melodic) and playing.

Superb vocals as well!
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Post by: Jarle on February 05, 2014, 11:45:20 AM
Thank you all for your positive feedback.
Geir, I haven't got a new guitar. But you are right about new strings.  :)
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Post by: Ferryman_1957 on February 06, 2014, 02:35:50 AM
Beautiful, lovely guitar and great vocals. I've had this looping for a while and it's created a nice calm feeling. I like the way you pick out little lead melodies on the guitar. More like this please.
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Post by: Nelson on February 06, 2014, 04:29:58 PM
Beautiful song from start to finish.
Exceptional guitar work and very cool vocals.

Well Done
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Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on February 07, 2014, 09:10:48 AM
We'll I think I can empathise with you on this song. I'm no tree hugger but I have loved trees from since I was a kid, they give us every thing we possibly need. And yes, I sit under my old apple tree on a summers day and it doesn't get more tranquil than that. Lovely song and guitar work.  Roscoe
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Post by: MrBud on February 07, 2014, 09:33:38 AM
Brilliant acoustic sound- and great lyrics :]
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Post by: Gnasty on February 11, 2014, 10:04:26 PM


I heard this already a few times. It`s kind of an Alex Lifeson acoustic sound and it`s quite a wicked talented piece Jarle.

Beauty lyrics. You are one talented man.
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Post by: pjd1 on February 15, 2014, 06:47:54 AM
Great sound well Done Jarle , super recording
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Post by: Oldrottenhead on February 03, 2016, 03:59:32 AM
on this day bump. see you soon Jarle.
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