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Title: "I Finally Realize" a Hook original
Post by: Hook on November 14, 2013, 06:06:30 AM
Pieced this together over the last few days. Recorded on the MR8, uke effects from ps02, vocals done using the mbr as a mic.

1 rythm uke
1 drums (YDD60)
1 bass
1 trumpet (TJ)
1 tenor sax (TJ)
1 distorted lead uke
1 vocal

I Finally Realize
written & performed by Hook
You seem to know but do I really care
You seem to be all around and I'm nowhere
And if I'm lost where would I be
if someone found me

I drift and I float
Hovering above in a trench-coat
A sullen look upon my face
Would I let you take my place?

You seem rock solid and I'm inflatable
A seal upon your seems while I am so fallible
And if I'm lost where would I be
If someone found me

Time drifts and passes
watching from above through horn rimmed glasses
A distant look within my eyes
A reality I finally realize

I drift and I float
Hovering above in a trench-coat
Time drifts and passes
watching from above through horn rimmed glasses


A sullen look upon my face
Would I let you take my place?
A distant look within my eyes
A reality I finally realize
Title: Re: "I Finally Realize" a Hook original
Post by: bruno on November 14, 2013, 02:07:42 PM
Great track Bro, very nice chord changes in this. Is that a distorted Uke - sounds like a lead guitar? Great lyrics as always.
B
Title: Re: "I Finally Realize" a Hook original
Post by: AndyR on November 17, 2013, 06:32:07 AM
Wot? Only one comment?

This is very tasty.

I often read your intros and think "wot no guitar?!" and then don't miss it at all when I'm listening :D. Mighty cool uke-ery :)
Title: Re: "I Finally Realize" a Hook original
Post by: T.C. Elliott on November 17, 2013, 07:08:27 AM
I, too, have been using thumbjam of late. It's good to hear what you're doing here so that maybe I can incorporate this style a bit more into my recordings. I really like the music here. The lyric and vocal is good, too, but I'm really drawn to the arrangement and playing/recording.

Okay, that lyric grabbed me out of my musical thoughts.. Using trenchcoat and inflatable definitely got my attention. That first verse is very good, my favorite bit lyrically.
Title: Re: "I Finally Realize" a Hook original
Post by: Farrell Jackson on November 17, 2013, 07:18:31 AM
Nice one Hook! That distorted Uke solo sounds like an electric guitar, cool!

Farrell
Title: Re: "I Finally Realize" a Hook original
Post by: Jarle on November 17, 2013, 09:53:25 AM
Nice song. The distorted uke sounds really good.
Title: Re: "I Finally Realize" a Hook original
Post by: Redler on November 18, 2013, 06:17:37 AM
Stunning!! Trumpet and sax gives a good taste to this! MR8 may be a good recorder! Sounds great!
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