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Title: "Goodbye blue Days " re-recorded [ready for consumption]
Post by: MrBud on August 12, 2013, 06:42:55 PM
Feedback of any kind very much appreciated.
Thank's
George
Title: Re: "Goodbye blue Days " re-recorded [ready for consumption]
Post by: Geir on August 13, 2013, 03:24:23 AM
Wow that was really lovely. A great melody. Great harmonies.

Love it
Title: Re: "Goodbye blue Days " re-recorded [ready for consumption]
Post by: Tangled Wires on August 13, 2013, 11:18:00 AM
Wow, what a song, kind of sounded like a long lost Beatles track at times, full of melodies to die for and an intimate warm sounding recording which just enhanced the connection you feel to it all.

That chorus is a killer, great chord progressions and wonderful harmonies.

Third listen now...seriously good this!
Title: Re: "Goodbye blue Days " re-recorded [ready for consumption]
Post by: SwanSong on August 13, 2013, 11:51:37 AM
HI George and very lovely song. great dynamics. and lyrics.
wonderful vocals. i agree with Geir. wish u the best NEIL
Title: Re: "Goodbye blue Days " re-recorded [ready for consumption]
Post by: Flash Harry on August 13, 2013, 03:45:20 PM
It's a lovely song. I particularly love the modulation just before the chorus - nice chord progression - a little unusual and sets a bit of tension.

I would like the vocals further forward, but that is just personal taste.

Love this and it's heading for my now very full piepod.

Thanks George.
Title: Re: "Goodbye blue Days " re-recorded [ready for consumption]
Post by: Redler on August 14, 2013, 12:16:24 AM
Agree with Beatles comparison! Great melodies and harmonies!
Title: Re: "Goodbye blue Days " re-recorded [ready for consumption]
Post by: MrBud on August 15, 2013, 06:22:54 PM
Thanks very much for feedback,and guilty as charged with Beatles comparison,couldent
get away from it.
I guess since the Beatles never got back together,i had to formulate my own version,, !
Title: Re: "Goodbye blue Days " re-recorded [ready for consumption]
Post by: bazz-t-bass on August 16, 2013, 04:28:32 AM
Hi...Very 60's feel to this so right up my street. ..Gt stuff

Regards

Bazz
Title: Re: "Goodbye blue Days " re-recorded [ready for consumption]
Post by: Jarle on August 17, 2013, 12:03:41 PM
Beautiful song performed with conviction. The harmonies are spot on. Love it.

JOA