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Title: 'King of Favors' original by Ted
Post by: Ted on July 17, 2013, 11:21:59 PM
King of Favors
©1989, 2013 Ted Johnson
Ted: All instruments
Recorded on Garageband except bass and vocals recorded on Micro BR


You prey on sentimental fools. You are a parasite.
You're not the friend they knew in school, but you look just like him
So they stick their necks out for you, into a guillotine.
You're hooked on charity like it was morphine.
The loans that you forgot. The flaky acts forgiven.
The rooms when you were homeless. Do I have to list them?
You've reached your angle of reproach. Is this your victory.
You never got a cent from me, but you got the best of me.

And so I crown you the King of Favors.
You've given me a bitter taste in 31 flavors.
Pass the hat around, the king has spoken.
You've been given so many breaks. Why aren't you broken?


So you're the orphan of luck; circumstance's victim?
Do I look like such a schmuck? This is a barter system.
So if you want your supper, you better learn to sing,
'Cause I won't kiss your ring, your ass, or anything.
You've thrown so much away at the first sign of resistance.
The state you're in today came at your insistence.
Before you say I have no heart at all.
I'll give you one donation: This is your wake up call.


Check out the version with a slightly faster tempo.
 (https://songcrafters.org/community/index.php?topic=18985.0;msg=234580)


This is a new demo of a 20+ year-old song. It used to have a faster tempo, a saxophone, and an African/Disco rhythm. I performed it with my band Jumping Genes.

It's kind of a "Fuck You" song written about someone I know who has gotten his life together since the song was written. Now the same person wants to sing this song, so I created this new arrangement. Life is weird.
Title: Re: 'King of Favors' original by Ted
Post by: Geir on July 18, 2013, 01:47:17 AM
A finally a new TedSong !!!

And a fine one it is ! Excellent guitarwork ! And that bass is just perfect.

oh and that brassy outro is fab !

I had some problem getting all the words tho, could you post the lyrics please? :)

Title: Re: 'King of Favors' original by Ted
Post by: Greeny (No longer active) on July 18, 2013, 04:04:12 AM
Very fine indeed. Superb melodies all over the place (it doesn't let up once!), and such a great arrangement. Love the distorted vocal part. Love all of it actually. Damn cool.
Title: Re: 'King of Favors' original by Ted
Post by: Oldrottenhead on July 18, 2013, 04:33:34 AM
braw tell yer maw. great to hear a new/old ted song.
Title: Re: 'King of Favors' original by Ted
Post by: Jarle on July 18, 2013, 06:53:59 AM
Nice song. I really like the chorus.

JOA
Title: Re: 'King of Favors' original by Ted
Post by: kenny mac on July 18, 2013, 07:01:29 AM
This is a cool tune,love it.well done.
Title: Re: 'King of Favors' original by Ted
Post by: Ted on July 18, 2013, 08:01:54 AM
Thanks for the feedback.

Geir: I added the lyrics to the main post up top. I should say that these lyrics are written by a highly judgmental Ted in his 20s. It's not a song I would write today. I like to believe I've become a more empathetic person.

The vocals were intended to be reference vocals that I would redo later. I did them in one take, and I thought it was an interesting contrast singing such scorning lyrics in such a calm quiet way.

The drummer who will be eventually playing this song suggested that I increase the tempo, so I opened the MP3 in Audacity and speed it up digitally. Here it is. I think he was right. It makes it a little more Punk, which is what I was after.
Title: Re: 'King of Favors' original by Ted
Post by: Hook on July 18, 2013, 01:35:18 PM
Awesome tune brother, I definitely dig the distorted vocal & fab lyrics. Very interesting & excitingly written song.
Rock On!
Title: Re: 'King of Favors' original by Ted
Post by: launched on July 18, 2013, 09:28:34 PM
Cool song Ted, I like it!
Title: Re: 'King of Favors' original by Ted
Post by: henwrench on July 22, 2013, 06:42:24 AM
Love the way it kinda all falls together, deserves many listens, and yeah, it's always cool to hear new Ted stuff...

                                                  henwrench

     guitars sound great too.

Title: Re: 'King of Favors' original by Ted
Post by: Satchwood on July 23, 2013, 07:29:51 PM
Enjoying your song man!!  got a cool groove and cool lyrics man!
Title: Re: 'King of Favors' original by Ted
Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on July 25, 2013, 07:06:57 AM
Nice one Ted, listened to both versions and enjoyed both..........Willie
Title: Re: 'King of Favors' original by Ted
Post by: Groundy on January 17, 2018, 11:19:01 PM
I found this today in The random Dozen.
Nice one Ted.


Alex.
Title: Re: 'King of Favors' original by Ted
Post by: Ted on February 15, 2018, 10:40:53 AM
Quote from: Groundy on January 17, 2018, 11:19:01 PMI found this today in The random Dozen.

Thanks. I should check out the random dozen from time to time. That's not a feature I've explored.