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Title: Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Lost Highway CWB on February 10, 2008, 07:28:50 PM
_This is my last try until now on The Boss Micro Br.

It's the first that have a original bassline created and recorded by me last night.

I'm a Guitar Player, Not a Bassist but with the possibilities that this device offers I borrow an old bass from a friend of mine to see what happens.

Same as in my previous post, the drum pattern is the same. Hope the colours that I add keep the song interesting until the end.

The atmosphere in this track is opposite to my first shot: the "Segunda-Sem-Lei" song.

***

P.S. I had to edit the track to fit in the size rules...The original it's up to 5 minutes!

Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Oldrottenhead on February 11, 2008, 02:41:04 AM
great sound and nice tune , bassline and guitar reminds me of the cure, the bassline on its own is reminds me of joy division. tune is crying out for some vocals, do you mind if i give it a try?
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Lost Highway CWB on February 11, 2008, 03:12:51 AM
Hi Oldrottenhead,

I agree with you, the atmosphere in this song is reminiscent of this bands plus a little New Order too, especially in the bass as you see.

In the first apresentation I don't put that in perspective, but I expected some coments about.

A curious thing about is that I don't really have a bass, this one is borrowed of a friend of mine, as I said in the presentation, so I don't have a lot of skills on the instrument and the more high notes close to the 12 fret is more confortably to me to play.

Because of that I create this line with higher notes, while I was trying to experiment with the bass and then I put the guitar line and some fills.

Feel free to put some vocals and later we continue to discuss!

A translation fot the title of the song could be: "About Last Night"
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Oldrottenhead on February 12, 2008, 06:35:33 AM
hi your song is now called the lost highway after your username. this is still a work in progress as i want to tighten up harmonies , my timing and tuning and maybe rework the lyrics. please note this song is not autobiographical. inspiration came totally from your user name hope you like it.

the lost highway

ive been driving the lost highway
i dont know where it will take me
i just need some time away
ive bin driving the lost highway
on this forever changing landscape
through different towns and different places
but i still see the same old faces
ive been driving the lost highway

im going somewhere you wont find me
spend some time all on my own
dont know how long its gonna take me
i'll see you when i get home

ive been driving the lost highway
trying to see a different view
maybe sort myself out too
ive been driving the lost highway
im gonna drive to the horizon
im heading off into the blue
its something that ive gotta do
ive been driving the lost highway

gonna spend time just reflecting
on where ive been and where im going
dont know how long its gonna take me
ill see you when i get home

ive been driving on the lost highway
ive been driving on the lost highway

ive been driving the lost highway
ive been trying to find myself
but ive had no luck as yet
ive been driving the lost highway
ive been searching for some answers
trying to get a better view
so i can see a bigger picture
ive been driving the lost highway

i need time to sort things out
to figure out what i should do
dont know how long its gonna take me
or if im coming back to you

ive been driving on the lost highway
ive been driving on the lost highway
ive been driving on the lost highway
ive been driving on the lost highway

ive been driving on the lost highway
ive been driving on the lost highway

Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Oldrottenhead on February 12, 2008, 07:19:35 AM
would it be okay to post this song on the collaboration site nevermet.
www.soundclick.com/nevermet
its a site where we post collaborative works from microbr.
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Pedro on February 12, 2008, 07:49:14 AM
Lost Highway CWB:

Great recording man! One of the best recordings I've heard on Micro BR. Very simple, yet very effective.

Oldrottenhead: Very inspiring lyrics again my friend, love the high "I've been driving the lost highway" voice.

I see you have some bands in common.

Great work my friends, keep it up!
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Oldrottenhead on February 12, 2008, 01:07:58 PM
ive posted another go at this song at collaborations here is the link

https://songcrafters.org/community/index.php?topic=183.0
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Lost Highway CWB on February 12, 2008, 07:54:58 PM
I recieved the e-mail telling me that my post had reply when I was working and couldn't access to listen during the day.

Only now, at night I could see, what you do!

I really liked of your lyrics and your vocal performance! I think that you capture the essence of the song with great feel!

The lyrics fit in very well. You say that the lyrics are not autobiographical, but I feel connected with the lines that you create in some interesting way.

My inspiration to create this tune was very natural and fast, but I think that some things could be improved.

I'm thinking in re-record the song in the next weekend. As I said earlier the end of the song is edited to fit in the space of the server of this forum. There's a sort of "crescendo" in final part of the song that tries to bring the song to a higher level (nothing so complicated, just a part with chords in a different rhythm).


We can exchange ideas to shape the song in a better way, if you have the disposition to do that.

For example I think that maybe you should start to sing a little bit later after the intro. Your voice reminds a little of Peter Murphy (I think that's a good thing).

Thanks for the partnership, and let's continue to work.

P.S. I had experienced problems to download the mp3 file with your vocals. Can you send me this for e-mail?

Hope we talk soon
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Pedro on February 12, 2008, 08:14:34 PM
QuoteP.S. I had experienced problems to download the mp3 file with your vocals. Can you send me this for e-mail?

What problems are you having? Is it an error or something? To download you have to press the attachment link with the left mouse button or in alternative you can press the Ipod-like button on the right in the mini Mp3 Player. Try this to see if you can download it.
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Lost Highway CWB on February 12, 2008, 08:19:15 PM
Hey Pedro! Thanks again for your feedback and constructive opinions.

I'm a novice in home recording and I have a lot to learn about it with all the possibilities,  but I'm very satisfied in join this great community!

You get the point when you say that is simple. I'm not into all that "shred", fast stuff. I respect and admire virtuosity. But personally, I try to find simple things, colours and textures to build a song.


Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Lost Highway CWB on February 12, 2008, 08:25:55 PM
The message that appears is:Internet Explorer cannot download (name of the file) from microrecorders.org.

Contentdecoting has failed


Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Pedro on February 12, 2008, 08:31:17 PM
Quote from: Lost Highway  CWB on February 12, 2008, 08:25:55 PMThe message that appears is:Internet Explorer cannot download (name of the file) from microrecorders.org.

Contentdecoting has failed

Have you tried clicking on the Ipod-like button on the Mp3 player? It still displays the same error?
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Lost Highway CWB on February 12, 2008, 08:33:13 PM
Yes, the same error... :(
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Pedro on February 12, 2008, 08:44:19 PM
I just switched to Internet Explorer and it gave me an error the first time, then I went to other songs and tried to download the other files and it went well. Then came back to this topic and it started working! What a crazy thing...

Try to download other people's songs and then come back and try to download the songs on this topic again. It is a stupid solution, but try it. Also, did this ever happened with other songs? Or just with this one?

I'm sorry about this, I really don't understand what's the problem.
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Oldrottenhead on February 13, 2008, 12:16:12 AM
QuoteI'm thinking in re-record the song in the next weekend. As I said earlier the end of the song is edited to fit in the space of the server of this forum. There's a sort of "crescendo" in final part of the song that tries to bring the song to a higher level (nothing so complicated, just a part with chords in a different rhythm).


We can exchange ideas to shape the song in a better way, if you have the disposition to do that.

For example I think that maybe you should start to sing a little bit later after the intro. Your voice reminds a little of Peter Murphy (I think that's a good thing).

Thanks for the partnership, and let's continue to work.

for sure , im just going to work so will try emailing you later.
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Oldrottenhead on February 13, 2008, 07:01:04 AM
i actually met pete murphy a few times in the days bauhaus where starting out my mate robert king used to print a fanzine for indy bands and would stick a cassette on it with various band like bauhaus, cocteau twins, the birthday party josef k etc with songs they where working on sometimes months in advance of their release they would send demos to robert to put on the free tape for the magazine as a result when any of these bands played glasgow iwe would get on the guestlist andmeet them, i met and kissed liz fraser from the cocteau twins when they where a support act for blancmange lol at nightmoves in glasgow, re pete murphy if he was a girl i'd have shagged him very adrogenous looking guy.
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Pedro on February 13, 2008, 07:15:18 AM
Hey man, that's awesome, Bauhaus is great. I was just listening to Bauhaus the other day and I remembered you as well.

Quotere pete murphy if he was a girl i'd have shagged him very adrogenous looking guy.

Ahahaha,  :D

Lost Highway: Is the problem still ocurring?

Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Oldrottenhead on February 13, 2008, 09:12:34 AM
ive put the lyrics through babelfish translating from english to portugese should at least give you a laugh and maybe produce some hidden meanings mmmmmmmmm lmao.

here we go

a estrada perdida ive que dirige a estrada perdida eu não sei aonde fará exame de me que eu necessito apenas alguma hora escaninho ausente do ive que dirigem a estrada perdida nesta paisagem para sempre em mudança através das cidades diferentes e lugares diferentes mas eu v ainda o mesmo ive velho das caras que dirige a estrada perdida im que vão em algum lugar você não me encontrarão para gastar alguma hora onde todos no meus próprios não sabem quanto tempo seu ir me fazer exame do eu o verá quando eu começo home ive que dirige a estrada perdida que tenta ver talvez uma vista diferente classificar-se demasiado para fora do ive que dirige a estrada perdida im que vão à movimentação ao horizonte im que dirigem fora no azul seu algo que o ive começou fazer o ive que dirige a estrada perdida ir gastar o tempo que reflete apenas sobre onde ive sido e onde im que vão não sabem quanto tempo seu ir me fazer exame do mal o vê quando eu começar home ive que dirige no ive perdido da estrada que dirige na estrada perdida o ive que dirige o ive perdido da estrada que tenta ao achado eu mesmo mas o ive não teve nenhuma sorte como contudo o ive que dirige o ive perdido da estrada que procurara por algumas respostas que tentam me começar uma vista melhor assim que pode ver um ive mais grande do retrato que dirige a estrada perdida eu necessito a hora de classificar para fora coisas para figurar para fora de o que eu devo fazer não sei quanto tempo seu ir fazer exame de me ou se im que voltam a você ive que dirige no ive perdido da estrada que dirige no ive perdido da estrada que dirige no ive perdido da estrada que dirige na estrada perdida ive que dirige no ive perdido da estrada que dirige na estrada perdida

mibbes admin can sort it into verse and line thats the way babelfish spat it out . im now gonna convert back to see what comes out. lol.
i had a look and it came out complete and utter nonsense so be interesting for feedback on the portugese translation.
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: launched on August 26, 2010, 05:48:38 PM
This was a blast from the past! Sounds awesome!

Mark
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Oldrottenhead on August 26, 2010, 05:57:09 PM
think this was the final mix
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6265359

[soundclick]6265359[/soundclick]
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Oldrottenhead on August 26, 2010, 06:10:40 PM
he moises where are you?
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Redler on August 26, 2010, 10:37:00 PM
Great bumb!! Fantastic brit pop song with fine lyrics. "Lost highway"-lyrics are perfect on this melody. I can imagine the video for this song. Loved the simple production!

Kari
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: T.C. Elliott on August 27, 2010, 07:25:50 AM
That's a pretty darn good collab. I really liked the music track. And the vocals reminded me slightly of a smashing pumpkins song (but couldn't tell you which one.) Well the vocals and one part of the bass line combined.
ORH does a great job with the lyric/vox.
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Kevin Mammoth on August 27, 2010, 07:51:52 AM
nice one - from 2008 no less!   That's not a bump, it's an archaeological excavation!!!
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Facemask93 on February 12, 2011, 06:07:35 PM
Bumperty bump

Love the backing vocal

Rob
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Oldrottenhead on February 10, 2012, 04:41:21 PM
burp
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Oldrottenhead on February 12, 2013, 02:19:08 AM
o t d bump
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Oldrottenhead on March 29, 2014, 04:55:15 PM
nostalgia bump
Title: Re: _Sobre a Noite Passada
Post by: Oldrottenhead on February 10, 2018, 06:55:18 AM
on this day bump.