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Title: "Asylum Pit" a Geir original
Post by: Geir on January 17, 2013, 03:23:18 PM
This is not a result of recording some 20+ tracks on "Chirpy Chirpy Cheep Cheep"  (https://songcrafters.org/forum/index.php?topic=17433.0)  ;D ;D ;D

Started this just after my previous Garageband tune, but finished it today recording the vocals on the BR800 with the Behringer mic.

This is also the début of my melodica, purchased in London last November.


Asylum Pit
w/m: Geir
Strings, organ, bass and drums played and recorded with Garageband.
Melodica recoded with iPad mic
Vocals and mastering on BR800
As I lump it all together
in a big pile of dirt
my back is aching
and my head hurts


nothing really matters
behind these padded walls
I can bang my head against the floor
or ram my fist in the door

nothing really matters
outside these walls
you can run to the tower
but you'll never see the shore
Title: Re: "Asylum Pit" a Geir original
Post by: Flash Harry on January 17, 2013, 03:30:20 PM
It looks like it hasn't uploaded properly Geir.
Title: Re: "Asylum Pit" a Geir original
Post by: Geir on January 17, 2013, 03:48:39 PM
I know, trying to fix it ...
Title: Re: "Asylum Pit" a Geir original
Post by: Hook on January 17, 2013, 04:42:27 PM
Fantastic brother. Back with a ipad,a melodoca and a vengence! I love it man.
Rock on!
Title: Re: "Asylum Pit" a Geir original
Post by: Greeny (No longer active) on January 18, 2013, 02:33:58 AM
Total excellence! You've captured that epic kind of Scott Walker feel. The lyrics are superb and I love that elongated, rising vocal part. Sheer quality and talent.
Title: Re: "Asylum Pit" a Geir original
Post by: Oldrottenhead on January 18, 2013, 02:56:59 AM
yeah baby i want one of them ipadded cells.

fabulous. has a nick cave vibe to it circa "the boatman's call"
Title: Re: "Asylum Pit" a Geir original
Post by: henwrench on January 18, 2013, 03:19:18 AM
Ace!! That melodica is always gonna sound wicked but the organ!!! Oh my, the organ sounds real!! Is it?

                                                                             henwrench
Title: Re: "Asylum Pit" a Geir original
Post by: Gnasty on January 18, 2013, 10:31:29 AM


Oh yes this is special. Holding that note and the musical buildup behind is outrageously amazing. You are in fire Geir!!
Title: Re: "Asylum Pit" a Geir original
Post by: Rata-tat-tat on January 18, 2013, 10:36:13 AM
My head woul hurt too if I held a note for that long... This is a killer tune buddy. LOVE IT


Tod
Title: Re: "Asylum Pit" a Geir original
Post by: Tangled Wires on January 18, 2013, 12:22:27 PM
Getting a Nick Cave vibe on this one too, love the whole feel of this song it has such a deep warmth and quality to it.

Great use of GarageBand, did you record the drums by tapping your fingers on the kits in there? I have used these for small additions to songs, and must say they sound great here, and far more real sounding than the BR kits.

Absolutely top song!
Title: Re: "Asylum Pit" a Geir original
Post by: 64Guitars on January 18, 2013, 04:29:42 PM
Excellent. The melodica sounds great and I love that long chant-like vocal bit and the "ahhh" after it. Very cool.

Title: Re: "Asylum Pit" a Geir original
Post by: Nelson on January 18, 2013, 07:50:51 PM
Well done Geir.
Excellent instrumentation and love them vocals.
Title: Re: "Asylum Pit" a Geir original
Post by: Redler on January 19, 2013, 02:03:41 AM
Sounds very orchestral!! Loved the warm tones all around! Top class job on vocals, too!

Kari
Title: Re: "Asylum Pit" a Geir original
Post by: Jarle on January 19, 2013, 09:14:48 AM
Love the lyrics, and how you used the backing vocals to strengthen and build up under the long notes.

JOA
Title: Re: "Asylum Pit" a Geir original
Post by: Curd on January 19, 2013, 09:27:47 AM
I know I never heard this song in a buddy film from the early 70s...  but I should have.
Title: Re: "Asylum Pit" a Geir original
Post by: Geir on January 20, 2013, 12:02:59 PM
Thanx for the kind comments fellow songcrafters and admired musicians !!!!


Quote from: henwrench on January 18, 2013, 03:19:18 AMAce!! That melodica is always gonna sound wicked but the organ!!! Oh my, the organ sounds real!! Is it?
It does sound great doesn't it? Well that's all GarageBand !!! I'm so glad I finally got myself an iPad (even tho I do have mixed feelings about Apple's really strict control and closed systems).

I did love that organ-sound so much that I may have put it a tad high in the mix, loosing some cello and other tracks .... but hey .... that is one hell of an organ sound :D

Quote from: Tangled Wires on January 18, 2013, 12:22:27 PMGreat use of GarageBand, did you record the drums by tapping your fingers on the kits in there?
Indeed I did. And this is the first song I did it like that. And I must say it does open up a lot of paths to go for further songs. Like Greeny, I think I've explored almost every MBR/BR800 drum patterns, and it's great (and a bit intimidating) to be able to make my own so easily.
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Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on January 21, 2013, 05:53:00 AM
Hi Geir, this is what it's all about, home recording at it best. I've just started trying to use Garageband seriously and this encourages me to persist. Great post.............Willie
Title: Re: "Asylum Pit" a Geir original
Post by: Pine on February 06, 2013, 12:53:58 PM
Fascinating song my old friend. Having worked for nearly 20 years in a locked psychiatric unit i can relate.

The smooth, gentle music...what others see sometimes, covers the sometimes violent or psychotic thoughts that the individual may entertain within.

The instrumentation is perfect and there are those little pieces that whisper 'psychosis'....

On the surface, this song sounds simple...but what it speaks of is anything but.

Brilliant approach to a dark subject. great job..as usual!

Pine
Title: Re: "Asylum Pit" a Geir original
Post by: DeificDave on February 07, 2013, 11:02:31 AM
I could do with a room like that   ;) ...excellent song, fantastic arrangement, perfect performance, some very lovely vocal effects too!