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Title: Northern Train ------ HD
Post by: Kenneth on October 21, 2011, 06:22:18 AM





Well  henry, mike and keith and joe
Their bags all packed and set to go
The northern train is clear to board
But they don't want to go
The northern train is clear to board
But they don't want to go
Well henry, mike and keith and joe
They've  said goodbye not cheerio
The northern train is clear to board
But they don't want to go
The northern train is clear to board
But they don't want to go
Northern train
Northern Train
Lyrics/ Vocals- ORH
Music/ Opening vocals- Ken Davidsen
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Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on October 21, 2011, 06:56:33 AM
Nice collab guys, great harmonies on a deep, rich backing. I used to work 15-16 hour days so I can relate to the lyrics and they have my sympathy. Good song writing...............Willie
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Post by: chapperz66 on October 21, 2011, 08:14:07 AM
Great atmospheric piece. 

I still do some very long days - but not every day!  I'm not sure I could cope if it was every day.

Actually I'm totally certain I couldn't.

Really enjoyed this.

Paul
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Post by: cuthbert on October 21, 2011, 08:41:07 AM
This is really fine. Loved the harmonies - the beginning set reminded me of the Beach Boys. Excellent musicianship and songwriting throughout...it's a winner!
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Post by: Farrell Jackson on October 21, 2011, 08:45:46 AM
I love the Brian Wilson like opening harmonies...fantastic! This is a good collab. guys! ORH's vocals fit well and the guitars are very crisp and clear...nice one! I also live in an area where the unemployment rate is near 20%....not many jobs for the young ones.

Farrell
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Post by: TPB on October 21, 2011, 09:54:54 AM
Very nice song love the harmonies Can definately relate to the song
Tim
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Post by: andy casson on October 21, 2011, 11:25:39 AM
great writing, fabulous harmonies and lead vocal, the intro is oustanding. And a poignant subject, I have worked away mon-fri every week ,one spell for 3 years, and I know the feeling oh so well, used to hate monday mornings!
great song

andy
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Post by: Rata-tat-tat on October 21, 2011, 12:20:16 PM
Great song... I wake up every day saying the same thing. I've even suggested to the wife to get another job so I can retire LOL... I'm thinking a lot of fishing is in store for my retirement... Just me my boat and some fish in a lake seems to be the tranquility I need!!!! Oh and maybe a dog!!! That's it... me, my boat, and my dog on a lake with lots of fish!!! Yah thats it. Beauty guys!!!
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Post by: hardlock on October 21, 2011, 12:39:59 PM
Fine collab guys!  Very well constructed and a timely subject!  Love it!
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Post by: SE on October 21, 2011, 05:14:49 PM
Great collab, get the beach boys thing, but the vibe struck me, lots of unemployed young people here too and they,ve raised the retirement age, so how do they get a start?
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Post by: Oldrottenhead on October 22, 2011, 03:06:37 PM
when davidsen sent me the file yesterday morning, it had a title and was a completed song to my ears, he told me what it was about and asked for some words. so my job was easy, it is an honour and a privilege to be part of HD.

that D guy rocks.
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Post by: OsCKilO on October 23, 2011, 03:45:15 AM
Wow......


This is very very impressive.

Super collab!!!!!
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Post by: thetworegs on October 23, 2011, 04:48:27 AM
 
Quote from: side effect on October 21, 2011, 05:14:49 PMGreat collab, get the beach boys thing, but the vibe struck me, lots of unemployed young people here too and they,ve raised the retirement age, so how do they get a start?
Great collab......
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Post by: fenderbender on October 23, 2011, 11:39:31 AM
top class collab-
brilliant harmonies -great overall recording --
congrats --
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Post by: hooper on October 23, 2011, 11:57:18 AM
Very nice job!  A fun listen the first time through and getting surprised with the changes.
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Post by: Tangled Wires on October 23, 2011, 01:13:53 PM
This song has such a rich quality to it. Been listening to it on headphones, and it just emphasises just how well this is mixed, everything sounds in just the right place and at the right level.

Lovely guitar work Ken, love the how you have blended the two guitar parts together. Jim's lead vocal and the harmonies are out of this word.

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Post by: Rolow on October 23, 2011, 06:10:48 PM
You've got some really cool things going on here.

Then some other stuff too.  Don't overproduce, is my stupid opinion.
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Post by: Nelson on October 23, 2011, 10:04:50 PM
A lovely collab indeed.

The music is moving and Jim is spot on as usual.
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Post by: maxit on October 24, 2011, 01:05:13 AM
just powerful - a few words and music tell a story and a feeling. And how!   
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Post by: Greeny (No longer active) on October 25, 2011, 05:58:06 AM
This is absolutely brilliant! Serious quality on the performances, and a really lush production. A top notch collab. Those Beach Boys harmonies are so well done...
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Post by: stoman on October 25, 2011, 12:50:00 PM
The vocal arrangement is really well done. Nice song!

Regards,
  Steffen
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Post by: Oldrottenhead on October 21, 2016, 04:17:05 AM
OTDB.
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Post by: Redler on October 21, 2016, 06:36:49 AM
I've missed this gem earlier!!

Agree with the Beach Boys comparison on intro!

Amazing job, guys!!
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Post by: Mach on October 21, 2016, 08:32:01 AM
Nice choir intro. The tune carries through with a sweet serene sound. Reminds me a little of the Eagles back in the day. Guitar tone is great. Good song guys.

Mach