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Title: Land of our Fathers v1- andy casson
Post by: andy casson on October 13, 2011, 11:38:47 AM
Riff been hanging around for a few ages of men. Wrote a 2nd verse last month, been coming back to it on and off since. Enjoy

Lyrics

v1
Declare war on war through the seven seas
Take a good long look at the blood unclean
You heard the call, battered and torn
And shouted a war cry (baby) from the top of the wall

v2
Gather on the floor and plant your seeds
You reap what you sowand left us to bleed
You heard the call and signed on the floor
And cried to the sky with your banners of war

In the Land of our Fathers we will see
In the hand of God we believe
Title: Re: Land of our Fathers v1- andy casson
Post by: SE on October 13, 2011, 12:19:04 PM
Excellent rocker, really nice bass really drives it all along real nice, top guitar and vox to, an excellent listen will be back for more!
Title: Re: Land of our Fathers v1- andy casson
Post by: Gritter on October 13, 2011, 12:20:02 PM
some drivin' rock here. Very well put together and an excellent vocal!
Title: Re: Land of our Fathers v1- andy casson
Post by: launched on October 14, 2011, 07:30:44 AM
Great vocal, and I love the driving bass line as well! Scary ass chorus harmonies - Frickin' brilliant!!

I dig!

Mark
Title: Re: Land of our Fathers v1- andy casson
Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on October 14, 2011, 08:41:17 AM
I was sort of expecting a Welsh male voice choir and got a top class rocker. Great stuff..........Willie
Title: Re: Land of our Fathers v1- andy casson
Post by: Redler on October 14, 2011, 01:59:16 PM
Excellent tune, Andy! I got a slight Pixies (one of my favs) vibe on this! I like it!!

Kari