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Title: Every Breath You Take (Is a New Surprise) New Addistion
Post by: SE on April 25, 2011, 05:49:17 PM
Done very quickly hence the hiss and clicks, just a moment in time, very short too at 2mins 15
Title: Re: Every Breath You (Is a New Surprise)
Post by: Kenneth on April 25, 2011, 06:20:31 PM
Some nice guitar tones in here, sounds full with the headphones,wraps right to the far back. I like the bumps and clicks, gives the feeling of familiarity, and the vocals are, as always, very fitting.
cool, John!
Title: Re: Every Breath You (Is a New Surprise)
Post by: Geir on April 26, 2011, 03:18:04 AM
This is excellent !!

Great song and fab vocals as usual !
Title: Re: Every Breath You (Is a New Surprise)
Post by: Oldrottenhead on April 26, 2011, 03:33:44 AM
gaun yersel john
Title: Re: Every Breath You (Is a New Surprise)
Post by: Bluesberry on April 26, 2011, 07:25:05 AM
Damn man, I love this song.  Wonderful feeling here.  Sometimes the quickest recordings are the best. There is a real freshness here, lively, lots of life in this song.  One of my favorites from you, thats how I feel.  Great song John.
Title: Re: Every Breath You (Is a New Surprise)
Post by: Gritter on April 26, 2011, 08:14:51 AM
Very cool song. Sounds awesome!
Title: Re: Every Breath You (Is a New Surprise)
Post by: Gnasty on April 26, 2011, 08:21:57 AM


I like that opening guitar and the left pan goes well with your great vocal melodies on this!

Make it longer!! I love it!
Title: Re: Every Breath You (Is a New Surprise)
Post by: lg on April 26, 2011, 03:33:08 PM
Hey, another SE song!
And, it's a cool one, as well.....
Always fun to see a new SE song posted.

LG
Title: Re: Every Breath You (Is a New Surprise)
Post by: T.C. Elliott on April 26, 2011, 04:43:55 PM
I like the call and response in the guitars... really cool. I also like the tone of the vox.... and agree they fit very well. Maybe up them a hair to make them easier to understand. And you have drums that can actually be heard (better n my last one)     :)  -- pretty cool what you did with that their chord progression.

Yup, I like it.
Title: Re: Every Breath You (Is a New Surprise)
Post by: Redler on April 26, 2011, 10:44:36 PM
Fantastic song, John! I love the dialogue between guitars...cool vocals, too!!

Kari
Title: Re: Every Breath You (Is a New Surprise)
Post by: launched on April 27, 2011, 05:10:50 PM
Oh, man this is fabulous!

Even though it was quick work it sounds great, John. I agree it is too short, but I guess I'll have to play it a few times to make up for it!

Yes, I love it!!

Peace, bro!

Mark
Title: Re: Every Breath You (Is a New Surprise)
Post by: Rata-tat-tat on April 27, 2011, 06:16:19 PM
Hey John... this is killer... your vox and guitar work are always top notch.
Title: Re: Every Breath You (Is a New Surprise)
Post by: Kenny B on April 28, 2011, 01:14:29 PM
Cool tune!  Great guitars and vocals! I like the separation and
the repetitive type riffs work really well.  I like stuff like this.

Excellently done.

kb
Title: Re: Every Breath You (Is a New Surprise)
Post by: Vanncad on April 28, 2011, 04:49:35 PM
Wow - Love your vocals SE.

This is a great tune. Great lyrics too.
That bass line and guitar riff really works well together.

Too short though!!
Title: Re: Every Breath You Take (Is a New Surprise) New Addistion
Post by: SE on April 28, 2011, 06:49:38 PM
Thanks everyone for taking the time to reply, this song was just just a wee reaction to a little hospital trip I made  last Sunday, took a reaction to some prawns and had the slight inconvenience of not being able to breath, but the adrenalin, oxygen and inhaler did the trick, so no harm done.
I,ve added some more to this track, so I hope you like it.

                                                                               John  
Title: Re: Every Breath You Take (Is a New Surprise) New Addistion
Post by: Kenneth on April 28, 2011, 07:04:35 PM
That is sounding very cool John, rocks nicely now. Love those harmonics too.
Terrific that you could write a song about an experience--- a negative to a positive. My wife has a masssive peanut allergy, been where you were... Glad you're ok.
Title: Re: Every Breath You Take (Is a New Surprise) New Addistion
Post by: SE on April 30, 2011, 06:21:17 PM
Lots better now Kenneth, got a wee adrenalin pen just in case, but will be watching for those wee bug eyed sea monsters.
Title: Re: Every Breath You Take (Is a New Surprise) New Addistion
Post by: Nelson on May 01, 2011, 10:33:40 AM
OH Yeah
Nice groove SE

Hooked from the start. Killer guitar boost half way through.

It has that Doors vibe going on.
Title: Re: Every Breath You Take (Is a New Surprise) New Addistion
Post by: OsCKilO on May 02, 2011, 05:36:39 PM
This is superb!!!!

The worst times often make the best songs.
Title: Re: Every Breath You Take (Is a New Surprise) New Addistion
Post by: Oldrottenhead on May 02, 2011, 05:39:34 PM
dont let it put you off the seafood john.

braw addies byrawaymaman
Title: Re: Every Breath You Take (Is a New Surprise) New Addistion
Post by: Satchwood on May 02, 2011, 08:44:59 PM
Man John, this song has got a great groove.!. ...  great sounding panned guitars and that bass line drives... great vocals, they're so real..................gotta be your best bro..........your new version got some great rockin riffin guitar work!
Title: Re: Every Breath You Take (Is a New Surprise) New Addistion
Post by: chip withrow on May 03, 2011, 03:54:59 PM
Those guitars! Someone mentioned Doors, which I hear, too. Also has a Psychedelic Furs feel. Nifty, snaky groove, and the vocals get more intense as the song goes on - in fact the whole song builds and builds powerfully.
Title: Re: Every Breath You Take (Is a New Surprise) New Addistion
Post by: des0free on May 03, 2011, 11:50:48 PM
Haunting! Grabs me!  And love the lead guitar riffs.