Deeper ... A sincere thanks to Oldrottenhead for the perfect Lyrics, Vocals
and collaborating on this with me.
You mainly surf around the surface
Or shyly skirt around the edge
Careful not to raise the temperature
Keeping your cool and distance
You won't go deeper
You can't go there
A tidal wave of raw emotion
Bolstered down and hid away
You won't go deeper
You can't go there
It's too dark and dangerous
You might get caught up in the flood
Overwhelmed in spontaneity
That's just a step too much
Detached remote and cold to touch
Feeling distant and unknown
Just the way you like it
Nothing hard or sharp to cut
You won't go deeper
You can't go there
You won't go deeper
You can't go there
It's too dark and dangerous
You might get caught up in the flood
Overwhelmed in spontaneity
That's just a step too much
Hurry quickly home to mother
Snuggle safely in her arms
She'll protect you from the dangers
She will bring light to the dark
Where you can surf around the surface
And shyly skirt around the edge
Rhythm Tracks: Kenny B.
Lyrics / Vocals: Oldrottenhead
This has a great vibe. Melodic, with a dark undercurrent. I love the chords changes that give it a real edge on the chorus. The main riff is a killer too. A mighty fine piece of work by both of you, and the mix is perfect... total clarity.
My goodness this is slick! Love the beat and the groove, great vox Jim!
PiePod!
Mark
Brilliant !!!!!
Yeahhhhhh hooooo, a new Songcrafters super-group.....deadly. You got a style Kenny. Jim, brilliant, more brilliant than usual brilliant. Great music, great lyrics/vocals.......it all adds up to some kind of awesome.
loving this mix kenneth, it was a pleasure get your music to work with and what you have done with my raw 1st take and made it sound so clear is fantastic.
cheers.
lets do some more.
HI , AGREE with the comments. wonderful song very attention getting.
and great mysterious vox..love the effects on instruments. this wont
go deeper than just a big bump up ..best regards NEIL
Thanks guys for all the great comments ... and thanks again to ORH
for making this happen ... vocals were perfect and sounded better
once I tamed the guitars ... yes ... definitely would like to do more.
And thanks for adding the words to the post ...
Kenny B.
Hello Kenny
I agree, this is one funky groove and a killer mix... nice and clear.
Jim, the magic man, proves to be as unstoppable as ever.
This is a really cool track... Keep'm comin
Nelson
Yeah, nice one.
It's got good "wide" feel to it in the stereo. Love the bass riff and, like Greeny, I think those chord changes add a real edge to the chorus .
Love that riff, it's a killer and the sparse arrangement works really well, it gives real space for the vox. Which of course work so very well again, third of Jim's collabs in a row that I have listened to!
Excellent collab guys, very well written song Kenny and great vox Jim.
Cheers,
Nigel
Wow, this is great...simple but totally infectious riff in the verse, and the wonderfully melodic chorus.
Excellent vocal and the production is second to none.
It all adds up to a very special song.
First Listen. Love your stuff Kenny. and ORH you are our GOD.
Fine job from you both! That riff is too catchy :) .
Kari
Thanks again for listening and all the compliments ... ORH made these chord
changes work and happen ... otherwise, this tune would not have happened.
Kenny B.
Sh*t this song kicks ass!
Great collab guys! Killer piece of work!
Wow this is kick ass, KennyB.
That Bass is just sick... I love it.
Jim, the lyrics really brings it to life... great write and spot on vocal performance.