any musicians, can you make my song "too near the sun" sound better

[kenny mac]

Bump 

[kenny mac]

I actually like the 1st cut of this ,I,e the original.
It has a rawness that breaths life into it,and reminds me of stuff like the church

[Flash Harry]

Cool bump Kenny - I'd not heard this one.

[danieldesete]

thanks for the bump, I love to see the song progress through the mixes, and some of the problems seem very fare away now.
Another ORH gem

[steelguitar]

My try with this super song
Just a track with acoustic guitar with fishman pickup through the microbr cosm effects
Jean-Sébastien

[Oldrottenhead]

braw tell yer maw!

[steelguitar]

The same version but upgraded. I have cutted some useless parts of my lead guitar, the goal was to listen to properly the vocals
Jean-Sébastien

[Speed Demon]

This is a cool number, ORH. I'll give it a shot. I'm feeling the need for speed.

[Oldrottenhead]

Spider bump. Happy days.

[kenny mac]

I do like this song,I might get around to having a wee go at it soon