"Fortune" - original composition (key, guitar, spoken word)

Started by Satchwood, February 20, 2010, 01:05:19 PM

hank987

The spoken word fits your style, and this song very well. As usual, the musicianship is top notch!

rvincent55

This is an outstanding piece of work! The intro has a very nice "Pink Floyd" vibe to it, and the arrangement flows perfectly throughout. Excellent musicianship as well!
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Tony W

This is fantastic Tommy. Not only an awesome arrangement, but the production is fantastic. You continue to impress.


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Jim1970

That was So Intense!!!  Love when the Guitar Kicks in and That Piano part with the Synths together!!  Just brilliant!!!!  You voice Just adds to this great tune!!!

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j.g.

This is great in every respect - playing, production, ideas, lyrics, feel - you have a little masterpiece here. Thanks for posting.

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lg

This is a nice proggy composition, and I love the use
of your spoken word in this. It adds to the intensity.
You have a great handle on the keyboards as well as
guitar.

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Satchwood

Thank you for listening and taking the time to comment!!  This was one of my experimental pieces ~ kinda wanted to do some more keyboard/guitar mixing...and then i wanted to hear what my voice sounded like spoken ~~ something new for me. 

I think it kinda of breaks down towards the end of the song, so I'd like to work on this some more and maybe get a female voice for the words & maybe some actual singing parts as well....

Thank you all!!
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