Anyother attempt at an poem/lyric

[Maverick31]

  It's ok to unload... but no positive?   I don't agree with that!!  I think there's been some pretty good positive here in the last few days!!  Hell I made 2 different songs out of one set of lyrics!!  I'd say that was inspiring and positive.  Wouldn't have done that without your words.   
PJ

No, not much positive in my life, so far it's just my relationship with my father, and this website.
Thanks for you support and nice words.

[Nelson]

Hey man,you are putting out some deep stuff, but when we start out writing we have to write what we know and that's usually what we're experiencing at that moment in time. If you're in a dark place in your life then some times your work will reflect that. i checked out some of your stuff on your myspace page and it is obvious that you are a really good writer. And you seem to have a passion for it.
I always thought I could write but I never had the confidence to really try it. But last year I decided to try writing songs but I didn't want to just write a bunch of OK songs. I wanted to write a few really good songs.  I create a character then I become that character in my mind and then I put him through somethings. Some good some bad. People are always telling how amazing it is that I put my life experiences in my music.
but the truth is not one of my songs is auto biographical, but I just thank them for their support and keep it mov'n. Plus my life is so boring , if I waited for something to happen in my life before I wrote a song, I wouldn't have any songs. 
As I was reading some of your work and it is dark man, the chorus from one of my songs came to mind. The last line is " Remember..... to get to the joy...you gotta fight THROUGH THE PAIN"
Sorry about the long ramble man but it's late and you had my undivided attention. Lucky you, huh
I'll post the song "Though The Pain" in the original song section. let me know what you think. It's not as good as Alice In chains but it my first attempt at a rock song.
Keep writing.

-Nelson

[Maverick31]

Thsnks for the feedbsck Nelson! I thinik thst I'm just s dark person in genersl... so I'd imagine thst my lyrics will be on the negitive side.

You see, I never had this "passion" for writting anything, until last week... words started coming out.

I just write what I'm feeling at that specific time. I never thought thst I woulld ever turn out to be a poet, let alone a lyrist. My dream since i was a little was to become a singer/lyrist... just never thought I hsd the ability to do so. As you can imagine, this forum has been a very big support system.

[Tony W]

Sometimes it's better to be alone and miserable than it is to be with somebody and it be worse than miserable. At least when you're alone, you can break the trend by yourself.

[Gritter]

I don't agree with that!!  I think there's been some pretty good positive here in the last few days!!  Hell I made 2 different songs out of one set of lyrics!!  I'd say that was inspiring and positive.  Wouldn't have done that without your words.

Even Eeyore finds things to smile about.

[Maverick31]

I'm still married to her, but yet I am alone...

[Oldrottenhead]

this is a hit worldwide why

I wanna hold em' like they do in texas, please
fold em', let em' hit me, raise it, baby stay with me (I love it)
love, game, intuition, play the cards with spades to start
and after he's been hooked I'll play the one that's on his heart

oh o-oh oh oh, o-o-o-o-o-oh
I'll get him hot, show him what I got
(2x)

can't read my, can't read my
no, he can't read my poker face
(she's got to love nobody)
(2x)

p-p-p-poker face, p-p-poker face
(m-m-m-ma)
(2x)

I wanna roll with him, a hard pair we will be
a little gambling is fun when you're with me (I love it)
russian roulette is not the same without a gun
and baby when it's love, if it's not rough it isn't fun (fun)

oh o-oh oh oh, o-o-o-o-o-oh
I'll get him hot, show him what I got
(2x)

can't read my, can't read my
no, he can't read my poker face
(she's got to love nobody)
(2x)

p-p-p-poker face, p-p-poker face
(m-m-m-ma)
(2x)
(m-m-m-ma) (2x)

I won't tell you that I love you, kiss or hug you
'cause I'm bluffin' with my muffin
I'm not lying, I'm just stunnin' with my love-glue-gunning (ma)
just like a chick in the casino, take your bank before I pay you out
I promise this, promise this
check this hand 'cause I'm marvelous

can't read my, can't read my
no, he can't read my poker face
(she's got to love nobody)
(6x)

p-p-p-poker face, p-p-poker face (2x)
(she's got to love nobody)
p-p-p-poker face, p-p-poker face
(m-m-m-ma)
p-p-p-poker face, p-p-poker face
(m-m-m-ma)
p-p-p-poker face, p-p-poker face
(m-m-m-ma)
p-p-p-poker face, p-p-poker face
(m-m-m-ma)

[Gritter]

'cause I'm bluffin' with my muffin
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Oldrottenhead]

i will raise you a jam filled doughnut but mind its hot and burny

[Gritter]

 
lmfao!