FIND A WAY

[Gritter]

This is a great song and your voice is what makes it great! A fine performance...production improvement will come with experience...

turning reverb down to zero on your tracks after they've been bumped and panning them 50L and 50R - as bumps should always go to 2 tracks (stereo).

...will help but you've got songwriting and arrangement skills to boot!

[Vanncad]

Hey man, don't beat yourself up.

There isn't anything wrong with this song. It might require a little polish, but I think this is a really good song.
Your voice is good, and the melody of the song is really catchy.

This song is from the heart and that's what makes it great.

 -Vann

[Jim1970]

Lots of raw emotion!!

Catchy, Loved it!

JIM

[rickenbaker]

Well written and well sang. Well done.

[Glenn Mitchell]

Yes an excellent song, well sung.
And I agree with Gritter that a big part of clarity is about the separation you get from panning L&R before and after bouncing.

[launched]

If someone else did it it wouldn't be YOUR song!

I feel the same way - This is great, love what you have done.

Peace,

Mark

[jackofall]

Thanks everyone, again.  My chance to get on the darned computer has become more limited! I'm determined to keep it up though and to listen to as much as I can. I'm learning so much here!