The Dream

Started by thetworegs, July 06, 2023, 07:10:03 AM

thetworegs

The Dream
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I was having a tinkle on the ivory and this came to mind...it might be a load of old tosh but it filled some time .....thanks for listening
The house was by the river 
where everyone desired to live
The forest was a shrine
for those who couldn't forgive
The small city
Was large in everyones eyes
The facade of houses hid all that was despised
The yellow city seemed so full of flies
The suburbs by the sea were seen as small
Everybody behind the  grey walls sat and cried
for a loss of all those despised

Karl was a confident man
He wanted it all
He wanted everything around him grand
The Austrian solider sat by his side smoking a pipe
He'd lost his future it was no where in sight
He'd lost his future it was no where in sight
His friends sat round the cold round table
Waiting for an individual explanation
Karl raised his hand
The hermits started to congregate
they formed a rock and roll  band
The heroine stood on top of the mountain and  sang
The time of the genius  began
The time of the genius began
The time of the genius began

The dream was about to end
The dream was about to end
The dream was about to end
   
If Life is a dream then use your imagination

TPB

Great brother the intro really set it up nice loved your vocal on this one
Tim
Life is not about the number of Breathes you take, it is the amount of times your breathe is taken away

hardlock

Wow, this seems your perfect match of style, mood and vocal presentation! Maybe this is the other Reg?  8)
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Those things we take for granted - when we're young and immature - will surely return to haunt us when we're old and insecure

SE

Yes a piano led cool track with a storytelling lyric.
This is so well performed which makes it a great listen!!
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Redler

Fantastic story telling song, Trev! Piano and your voice, what an enjoyable combo! Great track!
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DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee

Another great song. Really cool.
I have 2 profiles on this site, (NOW COMBINED INTO ONE PROFILE PAGE)
 One is a musical partnership with Keith Allen, ( we record songs as "The Devil's Toupee").
The 2nd one is for my other musical projects and collaborations. (DarrenG)
Thanks for listening.

Bluesberry

Superb Reg....love this....why aren't you submitting this for the festival? It's definitely a story song.....

Alternate Tunings: CAUTION: your fingers have to be in different places
 
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kenny mac

That's a great story there and the  mood is set by that piano.
Nice one.

Mike_S

Intriguing story, lots of lovely imagery. I kinda of zoned out nicely with this playing and time kinda stood still. I like this piano/vocal style you do sometimes Trev.

Mike
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