On and On - Collab with Kenny

[godinqc]

This is a collab with Kenny called "On and On"
Let us know what you think
Thanks

Hindsight  takes me in its grip
Messes with my mind
Takes me on a trip
Of All I could have said
Of All I could have done
My guilt it chases me .
It's got me on the run

The wall of my mistakes ,
come falling at my feet
There's a bitter taste
Of something that once
Was so sweet
I'm standing by the shore
I'm looking out to sea
The waves they move away
come crashing back at me

On and on
On and on
On and on
I torment myself
I need forgiveness
I struggle with my own existence
I close my eyes
To hide away
visions
They  they just repeat and play

I can feel the cold
As I touch the sea
I can see the shore
move away from me
I just start to float
Looking up I sway

Moving on , I can see you there
Moving on Light and space
Travelling in towards your voice
I can see your face
Smile

[StephenM]

What I think?  The key sounds like the ocean that you sing about.  It's subtle like a gentle wave action against that picked clean guitar sound.  Then that classic burst of distorted guitar comes in and out of the sound scape, like a building wave action as it heads toward higher tides.  Now, I'm at 2:50 and wondering if this is going to bring us toward a Tsunami like ending?  That could actually work with these lyrics as the song does deal with a desire to bury oneself in reflections of past failures....
I would say it doesn't go to the Tsunami but it does get some very big wave action (nice lead and harmony leads)...
It's a beaut gents... a mixture of Scotch and Canadian Mist. 

[Ella]

This is really beautiful, melancholic song. Great performance and Kenny´s highest voices sounds so good. Nice work.

[Bluesberry]

What a vocal.......beautiful music.........superb melody........love it guys......love it a lot.....what a vocal.....sheeeeesh....guitar solo(s) for the ages........

[SE]

This is a great collab, moody and excellent, what a great performance from you both.
Vocals and guitar are just too good, big respect!!

[Ray Brookes]

Love the moody & dark vibe of this song and a great vocal. Cool introspective lyrics and that guitar solo at around 3.30 ish is brilliant especially when it morphs into a twin lead kinda thing.

[DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee]

Brilliant collaboration. Love the feel of the music, dark and mysterious. Great beat, love that ominous keyboard in the back. Lovely guitars. And the vocals , wow. Sounds amazing. Great range. Impressive song.

[launched]

And then it kicks in!! You guys rock, killer tune! Epic, proggy, my kind of stuff