Just me- rough first version

[funkyaxe]

A tune ive been working on for a while. Much work to do but here's a rough live version for now.

[launched]

I'm a fool for this kind of music, it has a drama that works for me. "You making pastry, me chopping wood", loved that lyric. Well done, great song!

[Bluesberry]

Beautiful song......works well so far

[BerryPatch]

Wonderful piano laden ballad! Excellent piano work and the hint of strings really adds a nice atmosphere. Great laid back vocal and excellent, jazzy melody choices.

[Greeny]

This is lovely. Complex and beautiful chords like that always get me. I'd love to hear this built up into a finished version. More panning far left / right on the strings would really open this up IMO.

[Farrell Jackson]

A beauty of a song and excellent songwriting!

[funkyaxe]

Thanks for all the kind comments. Hope to post a finished version soon.

[Mike_S]

Yes you have a little nugget here Andy. Some really interesting chords and progressions here and a sweet main melody. Yes brilliant... love to hear it if you take it further.

Mike

[Ron D Bowes]

So far so good. Potential for a really cool song. Look forward to hear this in it's final version (Does any track really have a final version?)

[Blooby]

I enjoyed this immensely as is. There are a couple chord changes that resonated with me in a huge way.

Blooby