Developing Song - She's got no inhibition

[launched]

I keep coming back to the yummy a cappella Haylie Fox Vox! A song could be written around those alone. Professor(ess) of Rock!

[des0free]

I haven't had much time to work on this further, but here's the current version where I switched some of the chords in the chorus used some A7 (and also D7 and A7) chords on Zoltan's suggestion. Also I re-recorded everything and worked out a little intro riff.  I tried some other things that didn't work out so they got trashed...

Intro
A D A E
A D A E 

Verse 1
      A                    D
...She was born in New York city
        A                    D
All the guys thought she was pretty
    A          E
She never had a problem
D                A     
Getting what she wants
D                A     
Getting what she wants

Chorus
          D      A         
Cuz she's got no inhibition
    D                  A 
She knows just what she wants
    B              B7
She gets a man and holds his hand
    D7                A7
And takes him to the promised land
      D        A     
She's got no inhibition
      D        A     
She's got no inhibition
    D                  A   
She knows just what she wants

[The Gobi Desert Canoe Club]

Sounds like a fine collaboration,, all sounding good to me.    Willie

[Zoltan]

I think the best way to finish this one is... To throw the caution to the wind and lose all your inhibitions!

After all, if she's got no inhibitions... You shouldn't have them either.

So bring on the saxophone, bagpipes, or whatever is needed to make it a home run

It already sounds ear pleasing. It's poppy. The way you've mixed the guitars sounds "enhanced" which is probably a good thing.

A short solo section, some repetition and the ending of all endings (either a fade out, or invent something proper ).