World Number One - ODH Original

Started by ODH, January 18, 2022, 04:33:36 PM

ODH

World Number One v2
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So about six o'clock this evening I was doing the dishes before going upstairs to do the ironing and I started singing this melody. When I went upstairs instead of ironing I did this.


Life is so much fun
When you're the World Number One
When your name is on the tip of
Everybody's tongue

Just think of all the things
You could do
When you could easily beat the
World Number Two

...for fun

Life is so much fun
When you're the World Number One
When your name is on the tip of
Everybody's tongue

But the sad thing is
For you and me
Is that the best that we can hope for is
World Number Three

...or worse

- breakdown -

(new verse...)

It's kind of great when you're the World Number Eight
When you have to work real hard
It doesn't come on a plate
When you think of all the ladders you have to climb
And you can usually beat the World Number Nine

...On your day


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StephenM

Sounds perhaps like a football thingy... guitars and keyboards sound great.  Interesting lyrics and vocals... ended quick but good stuff.
 
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tonyc

great melody superb lyrics nice listen ......cheers tony cee
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BerryPatch

Great bit of Indie pysch! The short, lofi poppiness of the track reminds me of what I have heard from the band Guided By Voices. I love the off the rails ending to the song as well, it's like it disintegrates before your ears! Very creative and upbeat!

ODH

Thanks for your comments all

Quote from: BerryPatch on January 19, 2022, 01:48:33 PMI love the off the rails ending to the song as well, it's like it disintegrates before your ears!

I had this idea that it should have the feel of the improvised messing around bit in a band's practice session. Loose, disheveled and unresolved, incomplete.
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SE

Never mind  the ironing, quirky pychodlic,  cool!
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ODH

I've uploaded a new version, now with a new verse after all the psychedelic middle break. I lose the electric guitar and replace it with acoustic and drop two semitones. The lyrics in the new verse are all about contrast of being a hard working professional as opposed to a top-three rockstar championship winner.

And in case you were wondering if this about no-vax Djokovic, it isn't: if I'd written a song about him it would have been a very different one.
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Love it, love the vocal and the trippiness of it and the end that leaves you hanging wanting more.
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guitarron

Quote from: BerryPatch on January 19, 2022, 01:48:33 PMGreat bit of Indie pysch!
I really dig this. Very original use of layering tracks.


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Ted

Wonderfully weird. Reminds me a little of "one" spelled backwards.
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