"Crumbling Inside" a Hook original for DisasterFest

Hook · December 11, 2019, 08:00:37 AM

Wrote & recorded this over the last few days. It's about Global Warming and our relationship with the Earth.
Baritone uke & vocal along with the Baritone Uke solo were done in the car. Drums are DrumJam, the atmospheric sounds are TC Performer app & the bass is my U-Bass.
1 Baritone Uke/vocal (stereo)
1 Baritione Uke solo (stereo)
1 TC performer (stereo)
1 U-bass
3 drums (all stereo)

Crumbling Inside

written & performed by Hook

Crumbling inside I keep standing
Knowing whats expected of me
Responsibilities never cease
And sadness only seems to increase

My Emotions teeter unpredictably
Anger melting into tears
So little to look forward to
Sadness In the coming years

made our choices
And put our path in motion
Destroyed the very thing
That nurtures everyone

Ferryman · December 12, 2019, 06:40:08 AM

Nice one Hook, very atmospheric. I like the added sounds and the uke solo is very nice. A thoughtful piece.

Redler · December 12, 2019, 12:10:23 PM

Pieceful and atmospheric. This has a bit NordicMET vibe, imo...

Solo uke sounds almost sitar

Nice work!

Mike_S · December 18, 2019, 08:52:11 AM

Lovely Hook. I love the lyrics and also the overall feel of the piece. Really thought provoking. Those strange little noises you added just add some extra uneasiness to the atmosphere, but work so well with the piece.

Mike

T.C. Elliott · December 30, 2019, 12:34:41 PM

Man, that bass line is so good. I know it's not the highlight of the song, but a couple of places it just felt right. I like the picking and the melody. This is an easy one to listen to.

Mike Huntingford · December 30, 2019, 12:52:01 PM

Sad yet also inspirational. You did what in your car?

Nice stuff!!

Mike

kenny mac · December 31, 2019, 09:47:35 AM

Very atmospheric, that TC performer filters through your ears like an eery wind.
The solo is fab.
A great piece of work bro.
Atmospheric on.

dobrodaddy · January 07, 2020, 12:48:20 AM

Delicate yet soulful. Nicely done! I agree the lead was outstanding. Liked the atmospherics as well. Thoughtful lyrics and a great way to tag it at the end. Very cool.