Gossip,Liars,&Cheats.........1st song

Started by Hacker, May 12, 2009, 08:19:24 AM

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Well here is my first attempt at a full length song.

I mentioned in another post that it is not correct. I mistakenly bounced the rythym track through on a few bounces so the drums are way too loud. But it is my very first song fo I thought I would share.

Please keep in mind I am not a singer and have only been playing less than a year.

2 rythym tracks
2 Bass tracks
2 lead tracks
1 vocal track
BR drum arrangement

An ode to my disgust for Gossiper's, Liars and Cheaters.

Bluesberry

Good one for a first full length song.  Sort of a country punk feel, especially with those drums the way they are.  It actually sounds kinda good this way.  Real good job with the lyrics and raspy vocals.  I really like this.

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Geir

Having played less than a year this is amazing!!! and except for the loud drums the production is good. Great singing too. And nice the way the two leads answer eachother!!!

Cool first post indeed!!

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Oh well ........

Greeny

Definite ZZ Top territory, and a terrific little rocker. The drum volume is crowding out the excellent guitars and vocals though, so definitely worth a remix. What a start! You rock!!!!

Ferryman

Sounds great for a first attempt. As Greeny says, quit a ZZ feel there. Nice growly vox as well. One thought from me - consider panning your rhythm guitars a bit wider to fill out the mix. Everything's a bit narrow in the mix. But it rocks! Keep going - if you can do this after 1 year, you are going to produce some powerful stuff.

Cheers,

Nigel


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The Reverend 48

Excellent work I love it..It would be perfect for me if the lead guitar had a bit more dirt! 8) ;)...its going on my xplod 8)

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Jim1970

Keep em commin!!!!!!

Cool Rockin tune

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StevieM

Yep, just like one of my favourite bands. Keep 'em coming.
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Wiley

Drums might be a bit loud,  but you got a good drive to them.  This is an awesome first post. Had me tapping my foot.