Forgive Me My Trespasses by Oldrottenhead LITLR

[Oldrottenhead]

this one was originally gonna be about 4 minutes long, but i decided to shorten it for the two minute fest, that plus life is getting in the way of making time to do a full band version of this one. but i will come back to this when i get time, with a few more verses and maybe a bridge or such.

recorded live in the living room straight to my micro br. using a tweaked fornylon setting with tapped delay to give it a faux stereo feel.

it is what it is

Forgive me my trespasses
As I come through your door
You look like your uncertain
But I can't say for sure

Cos I can't see the clouds
I'm blinded by the sun
And I can feel the rain
And don't know where to turn

I think I've started something
I don't know how to end
Cos I don't have the answers
So will you help me friend

Cos I can't see the clouds
I'm blinded by the sun
And I can feel the rain
And don't know where to turn

Forgive Me My Trespasses

W/M
by
Oldrottenhead

Jasmine electro acoustic
and
vocals

[cuthbert]

I'm quite sure I enjoyed your wee LitLR tune, James. Seems to work fine within the constraints of the fest, but also looking forward to the full version when you get to it.

[Redler]

Fine songwriting James! Very melodic!

Now, the full version...

[Groundy]

Sounding good James,
Looking forward to the full version.


Alex.