"Hold Me"

Started by boneonbone, June 09, 2017, 07:09:49 PM

boneonbone

Hold Me
Time:
0:00
Volume:
50
0
Don't know what possessed me to write this type song, but if you like schmaltzy "love lost" 'the one that got away" type ballads, you might want to give this a listen.  My first attempt recording synth strings backing my acoustic on the BR800.  
Hold Me
© Copyright 2017

What if I was wrong, and you were the one
What will I leave behind, when my life is done
A wisp of smoke that dances away on a summer breeze,
A sliver of light that drowns in the shade of fallen trees,
Hold me

What stands before your eyes, you don't always see,
'Til a beacon of light, pierced through the night and surrounded me,
You showed me love in a way I never knew before,
And loneliness after you left, when you needed more
Unfold me,               then hold me.


Walking the shoreline at night, in the pouring rain
You are not here by my side, and I feel the pain,
I call out your name through the dark, hoping you'll be there,
I picture your face in the clouds, in the stars, everywhere........everywhere

Walking the shoreline at night, while the pouring rain,
Washes the tears from my eyes, things are not the same.
Like sand that was ripped from the shore, by an angry sea,
Love swept away by the current, deep inside of me.......reach for me

What if you were wrong, and I was the one,
All that you had hoped for, came undone.
You showed me love in that way I'd never known before,
And emptiness after you left, 'cuz you needed more

Come hold me.........just hold me
 
"Play because you love it. Don't worry about if it will ever make any money, just understand that playing is an end in itself, and you play music, it will make your life better. And, don't worry about being a star, don't worry about making money, worry about nothing, just sit down with your guitar and let it speak to you and that will make your life better. It will bring beauty into your life. It's a great thing to do."     ---- David Crosby

Redler

This is so relaxing and beautiful! Fine composition and performance!

Well done by both of you, just enjoyable listening!
recorder
Korg Sound on Sound
Redler & Co   
recorder
Audacity
      
recorder
Boss BR-80
recorder
Boss Micro BR

launched

What a great sounding recording, and a fine collab! Guitars, vocals, harmonies and strings work so well together.

You made a really good tune!

Mark
"Now where did I put my stream of thought. But hey, fc*K it!!!!!!! -Mokbul"
recorder
Boss Micro BR
                                            
recorder
Audacity
                                                
recorder
Cubase

Song List
About Me
Ok to Cover

Mike_S

Very good song. Very well performed and recorded. Well done guys, very pro indeed.

Mike
recorder
iPad GarageBand

Johnny Robbo

Lovely stuff, mate. Very intimate sounding & superbly recorded - it's like being treated to a private performance.
recorder
Audacity
recorder
Cakewalk SONAR
recorder
Adobe Audition


"The English may not like music, but they absolutely love the noise it makes." Sir Thomas Beecham

http://www.jrguitar.co.uk http://johnrobsonmusic.co.uk

Hook

Schmaltz isnt always a bad thing, beautiful song & the strings sound wonderful.
Rock on!

recorder
Boss BR-80
recorder
Boss BR-800
Because the Hook brings you back
I ain't tellin' you no lie
The hook brings you back
On that you can rely

Wonderful lyrics, and the whole performance and production is superb.    Willie
recorder
Boss BR-800

Mach

So Pro sounding. Clear & clean recording with a nice mix of instruments.
Vocals sit in the mix so perfectly. Nice work.

Mach
recorder
Pro Tools
recorder
Cubase
recorder
Adobe Audition
recorder
Boss Micro BR