My son recorded a song. It needs lyrics and vocals.

[Ella]

My 16-years old son Topi composed and recorded a song on piano. It would be interesting if someone wrote lyrics to it  and maybe sing the vocals too?

[Oldrottenhead]

is a beautiful song, i'll see if i can do something.

there is a little distortion on the track, maybe you could get Kari to re-record Topi.

 i wish i could play as well. it is a great tune/song.

[Ella]

Thanks James! I thought it would be great to hear your version to this. We try to do better track in this evening. 

[Oldrottenhead]

here is a rough go at it. i hope Topi likes it.

chance a fine thing
but a fire burns
I will strike the match
light the candle
to find the way
still groping in the dark
but I will see through
the mist and shadow
as we grow

take my hand
and come with me
together we are stronger
mistakes may happen
along the way
to go boldly
ever forward
we will see through
the mist and shadow
we will grow
we will see through
the mist and shadow
we will grow

chance a fine thing
but a fire burns
I will strike the match
light the candle
to find the way
still groping in the dark

groping in the dark

w/m
Oldrottenhead/Topi

[Bluesberry]

Great song Topi, very talented to come up with something so beautiful.  Great stuff.

[kenny mac]

I would love to try something with this,it stirred up something in me as soon as I listened to it so that's a good sign for me.
If you could send the new version on to me Ill work on it.
im intentionally not going to listen to your version jim until ive finished mine in case it swerves me in a different direction.

[Redler]

Here's re-recorded version without distortion 

[Ella]

James, I hope that this new version is similar with the old one.  and fits with your wonderful words. Your version is  beautiful and sensitive. Topi is like  when his tune is getting a new life. 
Thank you Bluesberry for you nice comment and Kenny, it´s wonderful that you want to do your own version. Can´t wait to hear it.

[bruno]

Lovely tune, and loved ORH's lyrics on this. Super good, take a bow Topi.
B

[Hilary]

Oh it's very lovely, I couldn't sing along to it without crying . . .