1994 AGAIN (demoing video)

Started by artokh74, September 11, 2015, 03:26:40 PM

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really struggling to finish the lyric for this one so I made a rough quickfire demo playing the vocal melody with the guitar to perhaps help out the inspiration.

Here's the recording of that last track.


https://www.ebutuoy.com/watch?v=CHey6uT6GnY


EDIT: added the first take with vocals a few days later...
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Kenneth

sounds good. It shouldn't be hard for someone around here to help out with a lyric and / or vocal!
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Johnny Robbo

This works well as an instrumental to my ears. Strong melody, played with feeling, over a superb chord progression. Excellent stuff!
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chapperz66

Quote from: Johnny Robbo on September 12, 2015, 01:05:31 AMThis works well as an instrumental to my ears.

And to mine as well.  The chord structure is interesting and the lead guitar sits brilliantly within it.

Really enjoyed it.

Paul

Groundy

Sounds good Art. Must agree with the other posts, you don't really need vox on this.............Alex

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Farrell Jackson

I'm joining the crowd on this one....it works very well as an instrumental...no need for vocals to make it complete....it's already there. Some great, flowing guitar work!

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Test, test, one, two, three.....is this mic on?

Blooby


I'm loving that main rhythm tone. An interesting mix of tones actually. Cool tune. I really like this as an instrumental but am pretty curious with a vocal doing that melody.

Peace.

Blooby

SwanSong

Boy great song vibe. I  really enjoyed this . sure has the making
of a good song with lyrics should really make the song fly cheers NEIL !

artokh74

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Thanks for the feedback.

Here's the first take of the song with lyrics...finally!!
Very rare for me to have to work this long on a single song. :)

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