"I'm Heartbroken" a Hook original for HeartbreakFest

[Hook]

Wrote this today and just put it down, new to me nylon string guitar (haven't changed the strings yet) using the 008 on board mics. I really wanted NewsFest.
1 guitar/vocal (stereo)
1 guitar solo

I'm Heartbroken

written & performed by Hook

I'm heartbroken
My news didn't make the cut
I'm heartbroken
I fear I might fall into a rut

Because I know I'm going to have to dig real deep into a dark dark place
I'm going to have to come face-to-face with my inner heartbreak
Or I guess I could just take a break
But that would just seem fake

I'm heartbroken
and to me it just doesn't make sense
I'm heartbroken
and I better hear some really good Sad laments my friends

Chorus

I think my wife would like it that way
I think she thinks I could find
a better way to spend each day

I'm heartbroken
but I'm sure then I'll get over it
I'm heartbroken
So let's get on with it

[Groundy]

Nice one Hook, so laid back, great sound on your new guitar...Love the sound of a nylon string guit.
Well done..........

Alex

[chapperz66]

Another  fine song, Hook.

Paul

[Geir]

Great song hook!

Love the sound of your guitar.

Yeah......  Let's get on with it

[steelguitar]

Jazzy sounds on an nylon string guitar... ;-)

Very nice song, beautyful chord progression,  love the rythm

Jean-sébastien

[Oldrottenhead]

i empathise with you hooky i wanted newsfest too. brawtastic song.

[ODH]

I feel your pain, brother; Newsfest supporter here, too, also looking for an angle.  And there was some wry-smiling going on with your lyric; I was ticking the same boxes all the way through.

I like that guitar, sounds great, btw.

 

[kenny mac]

Love that tone,that guitar is sweet .
Nice one hook

[bruno]

Wow bro - this is quite a departure for you, and its very, very good. Lovin the new guitar :-)
B

[cuthbert]

Love the bossanova feel you're getting from your new guitar. Don't change the strings! Sounds perfect as is. Of course, this advice is coming the guy who still has his 5 string guitar... 

Did I detect a hint of reportage style to your lyrics?