You Didn't Know

Started by allysonmarie, December 08, 2014, 07:40:35 PM

allysonmarie

October 7 2014 6 I'm Sorry You Didn't Know FINAL
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 This is a poem I modified for the simple melody I was working with one day. Another one where I hoped to leave the pain for the matter I'm speaking of with the lyrics.  

I'm sorry you didn't know
I buried my wings long ago.

Your unexpected, over blessed
baby girl.

You should have let me die.
I'm not getting this right.
Now pieces of a painful break...

I'm sorry when you hug me
I am numb from skin to soul.

All these years have never been.
And I've nothing to show.

Hilary

Your honesty is astounding Allysonmarie, as is your talent.

Thanks for sharing.
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Hook

Powerful stuff Allyson. It would be impressive enough if you were just a powerhouse vocalist but your lyrics put you in a whole different level. As always I am left very moved by your song.
Rock On!

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Because the Hook brings you back
I ain't tellin' you no lie
The hook brings you back
On that you can rely

allysonmarie

Just one other soul out there who can listen can do so much to lend toward healing. Thank you both. I know my presence is small so I'm grateful.   

Groundy

Top Class Allysonmarie...Alex

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If I had known i was going to be this thirsty this morning I'd of had another Beer last night...

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SwanSong

Your songs have so much feeling and super vocals
very sentimental song this is and well composed
and produced. your music is always a treat to hear
happy holidays cheers 2 thumbs u p NEIL ..!!

allysonmarie

Thank you Neil and Alex. It's strange to be writing what I have recently, but it's helping me a lot and I'm grateful it's something a listener can enjoy in their own way as well. 

T.C. Elliott

You paint a beautiful picture of a bleak and dreary landscape. I like your melody here. It still has that element of soaring as in most of your music that I've heard, but it's focused nicely here.  I love the line "numb from skin to soul."
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