Run away Train

Started by TPB, October 21, 2014, 06:21:23 AM

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Runaway-One Way Train
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Wrote this about a month ago all about staying in bad relationships
Tim
Night comes    and I am here all alone
Staring at these empty walls waiting on the phone
Wondering just where you went this time
Seems you have gotten good at saying goodbye

When your home the loving is all so good
When your gone I am thinking maybe I shouldn't
One day your loving and the next day mean
You're a lite match and I'm Gasoline


Love with you is like a one way Train
A quick stop at the station then you're gone again
Love with you is like a one way Train
You stop and grab my heart then your off again

Last time you left I said I 'm through with you
Then you come back and I don't know what to do
You spend all my money and drink all my beer
Tell me you love me but then you're out of here

So I am sitting here staring at these empty walls
Wondering why the hell I love you any at all
Now that your gone there ain't nothing left at all
You even took the picture of my momma off the wall

Life is not about the number of Breathes you take, it is the amount of times your breathe is taken away

Gritter

The harp solo rocks...a lot of swagger here. Very cool.

DeificDave

Cool rockin riff, the harp solo is a nice touch, impressive vocal, you have a great sounding voice.
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Groundy

Nice one Tim, love it especially your Harp......Alex

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If I had known i was going to be this thirsty this morning I'd of had another Beer last night...

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Redler

Very powerful riffs here! Stunning job all around! The harp solo is just fantastic!!!
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fenderbender

great stuff Tim
great guitar playing and super harp sound
great lyrics and vocals


Tommy

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Hilary

Wow, fabulous and the icing on the cake, that harp solo.

Buckets full of swagger . . .
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comme ci, comme ça

T.C. Elliott

I like the groove, the rhythm fits together nicely to propel the song along nicely. This kind of has an old classic rock groove but definitely doesn't sound dated or lack any modern sensibilities. It'd be the perfect song to rip off a stinging solo to, I wouldn't mind being in the band that played this one.
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Jarle

I really like the harp solo. Well done.
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Nelson

Yeah, it's a real smoker Tim.
It does have that classic Rock n roll vibe, in the groove and those sick vocals.

So that what's a harp is suppose to sound like, Niiiiice.

love the panning through out the mix.

Well done.......
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