Fatal Lack

[johnnype]

This is the first time I'm posting a lyric on this site.
I wrote this song in anger, hearing of all the misery and war that goes on in the world. I call it Fatal Lack.


Fatal Lack

A fantasy corroding, a mind is broken down
Elegant corruption displayed throughout my town
Suffocating freedom, lacarated dreams
An abyss of tears is growing by endless, pouring streams

Organs are collapsing, initiate attack
Terror overgrowing, increase the fatal lack
Disregarded goverments, no shelter from the hail
If evil keeps increasing, there's no way we'll prevail

When your vision's fading, all that was has gone
Your family's has passed, and you're standing on your own
If men can be this twisted, if men will live for war
You close your eyes and die, you wont stay anymore

[TPB]

Well written as I am a lyric guy can appreciate this
Tim

[Geir]

Well written as I am a lyric guy can appreciate this
Tim

Ditto that !

Hope someone turns this into a song !!!

[Hilary]

Yep it's good and would qualify for a fester (the War Song Festival)

[TPB]

HEy I have a melody and chorus in my mind for this if you do not mind I would put this to music Just let me know
Tim