Final Say

[allysonmarie]

I could only do a few takes of this at the time, so this is pretty much an improvised recording. Wanted to share it anyways. I wrote it out of another low moment I was trying to turn around.   

I may have fallen
I might be displaced
And yes, for a moment
I may have shifted my gaze

But make no mistake
This is my game.
It goes my way,
I always have the final say.

And for all you do, honey...
The blood stain and scar-
The given breath you are-
Take it too far

This time I want the truth
My only rule, honey...
Make sure you leave me
Broken through

[Rata-tat-tat]

I dig it!!! You have a great voice and your skills on the keys are stellar!!!

[Groundy]

Another hit for me Allysonmarie, well done.............Alex

[allysonmarie]

I'm grateful you could take a quick listen. I hope to have time soon to work with an idea like this sound for some other lyrics I've had sitting around.

[Jarle]

Another great song allysonmarie. I would love to hear this with a better recording and maybe a bigger arrangement.

[Tangled Wires]

Very, very nice, the piano melody is very interesting and has an almost slight staccato rhythm in places which creates, in my opinion, a slightly more minimalistic sound to your normal free flowing fuller playing style.

The power, as always, is in your song writing and performance, and yet another prime example here.

[SwanSong]

ALL of your music has that special sound special quality
'and great vocals always a great listen keep singing and
sharing cheers NEIL!

[bruno]

Another excellent song Allyson.
B

[The Gobi Desert Canoe Club]

I'm sorry you have low moments but if it leads to good songs then it's a cross well bourne.  Excellent.  Willie