Song Of Orpheus (unfinished demo)

[averiguar]

This song is unfinished. it needs something. Any opinions/help?

[Geir]

Seems like the player doesn't work, and I tried following the guide to see if I could get any help for you there. Soundcloud has changed the interface slightly, but you will find the tracknumber there.

the guide is here:
https://songcrafters.org/community/index.php?action=articles;sa=view;article=9#post_SoundCloud

this is the code to make the player work:

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[soundcloud]158071486[/soundcloud]


Oh, and very cool track !! Like a mix of Led Zeppelin and Zappa, in a very good way !

[averiguar]

ok so in other words, you just spos't ta put the numbehs in between the html tags? I didn't knowda. Thanks for the help, kindly.
appreciate it. Now I know!
Zeppezappa? Okayyy. If you think so. Any clue what's missing though?
I lack a good drum set or I'd be on top of it with that. I also wanna do a long prog-gy type intro to it before finalizing the master track. What choo think it needs though?

[andy casson]

I really enjoyed this, great menace if the riff, and love your voice! What would I add? Drums or some simple percussion, and a harmonica or organ counter playing somewhere later in the arrangement? But don't listem to me, I know nothing
Andy

[SE]

Enjoyed the vox and guitar, cool stuff

[SwanSong]

HI . nice job. i know what u mean something could b missing here.
as a synth guy i will think about it . and if im able to add anything
will let u know. but like geir said problem with soundcloud . but
time permitting will dabble keep singing NEIL.!