"Hurt Us" a Pan original

Started by Hook, July 08, 2014, 07:45:35 PM

Hook

Hurt Us (with strings)
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This is the 3rd (& last) original from our session a few Sundays ago. I did the strings today in the waiting room of the tire place so my part was kinda remote. Pan wrote this tune about the book/movie Fault In Our Stars,which really moved her. I doubled her uke/vocal track & eq'd the tracks & the final mix a lot which is new for me but I like the way it turned out.
1- uke/vocal (stereo) uke
1- uke
1 cello (TJ)
1-viola (TJ)
Hurt Us
written & performed by Pan (strings by Hook)
Laying down
Looking at the stars
Make a wish
Just one wish
Something beautiful
So far away
One thing's consistent
Stars stay the same
But it's not perfect
It's not worth it

Chorus
Loved ones die and people cry stars fall from the heavens
We find faults in ourselves and we find faults in the heavens
We die young we fall in love as we wait to slowly die
The ones we love they go and hurt us but we love the way they hurt us

Laying down
Looking at the sun
How did I get here
This isn't me
Some time I changed
Some time I died
This isn't me
But it's not perfect
It's not worth it

Chorus

The ones we love they love to hurt us
But we love it when they hurt us
The ones we love they love to kill us
But we love it when they kill us

Laying down looking at the stars

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kenny mac

She is certainly a talented girl hook,you must be very proud.
I love her lyrics.
She has a cool voice as well .
Tell her from me she is a star.

Redler

Another winner!! Liked this, too!!
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Speed Demon

This young lady is on her way to being a star.

She has a good instructor, as well. That shortens the learning curve by several orders of magnitude.

Nicely done.


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There is room for all of God's creatures.
Right next to my mashed potatoes.

Satchwood

This is really sweet and touching, love the lyrics and vocals!!
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allysonmarie

What thoughtful lyrics she's written :) It's beautiful knowing that film, which is one sort/piece of art, helped to inspire another in this song.

Oldrottenhead

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Oldrottenhead
"In order to compose, all you need to do is remember a tune that nobody else has thought of."
- Robert Schumann

Geir

You are a very creative young woman Pan !!

Another fab song. Great lyrics. Great performance ! And daddy's additions are not too shabby either ;)



Geir
(President of the Norwegian Pan Fan Club)
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Oh well ........

Jarle

Another great song Pan.

Jarle
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andy casson

Crikey, this is great! I don't know the film but I love the song - the vocal is wonderful, the lyrics thought provoking even for an old fuddy like me- bravo

Andy