Identify

Started by allysonmarie, June 08, 2014, 03:22:30 PM

allysonmarie

March 21 2014 12 Identify Final
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This song is part of a poem collection I worked on some months ago. Very fun to play as I was figuring out the final arrangement.

This voice is still a child.
This soul loses itself amid the
Myriad shades of gray.
Here and there, creates a face,

And begs the god she's found her place.

To settle in as human.
To rest – content to stay.
Nothing would mean more
If not so soon she's run away.

Bluesberry

Outstanding, really good.  I love this as poetry and as a song its really strong.  Your vocals sound really good here.  I really enjoyed this.

Alternate Tunings: CAUTION: your fingers have to be in different places
 
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Tangled Wires

Excellent, loving that minor chord ascending pattern through the intro and into first verse, must have been difficult to come up with a vocal melody over this but what you have produced in this respect is outstanding.

The music has a very dark feel and you always produce a very full sound from that piano, and your vocal yet again proves to be a wonderful instrument in its own right.

Great arrangement and, without wishing to sound like a broken record, would love to hear your music produced on a multi-track digital recorder.

Micro BR's are very cheap these days you know ;) ;) ;)


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Jarle

Another great performance. You have a powerful voice.
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Hook

Powerful stuff!
Rock On!

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Because the Hook brings you back
I ain't tellin' you no lie
The hook brings you back
On that you can rely

Hilary

Oh yes, this is good. I love the minor runs on the piano with your powerful melody. Sing out loud, sing out true! xx
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comme ci, comme ça

thetworegs

Loved the piano too with your strong vocal it makes a great track.....
   
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T.C. Elliott

I like the dynamics you use, especially at the beginning, in the tempo. Using the slower pace to set up the quicker tempo that combines with the held notes in the vocal melody really works well together. I find it is almost your signature technique and it works very well.
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Redler

Very powerful! The lyric and your voice is perfect on this!
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SwanSong

Very stunning vocal.s your music so beautiful and mystical
very expressive almost opera kind of singing. powerful
vocals. for sure. well executed great job. keep singing
and sharing cheers NEIL.!