Just a jam called Momentum

Started by SE, March 18, 2009, 06:57:47 AM

dragonshade

Quote from: side effect on March 18, 2009, 01:54:15 PMhad a jam and came up with the music last night and wrote the liryics this morning in about an hour.

:o :o ??? Oh that's SO not fair  :P

GREAT JOB

Wiley

I agree Dragonshade Write the words in an hour.  I can think all day and can't come up with anything. LOL  But great job.  I like the second mix.  Much better and your vocals are very strong  and sound very good.  Can't wait to hear more.

Davo

I like this, it paints a cool picture.  The vocals are not too polished, not too raw-just right.
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Ferryman

Second mix is much better, well done. Your voice really shines through - you can hold that slight vibrato well without sounding forced. It's really calling out for vocal harmonies on the chorus now - that's your next challenge  :)

Cheers,

Nigel


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Greeny

Oh yeah... that's got it! The voice really carries it now, with the guitar complimenting rather than dominating. Very nice work!

Jim1970

Good tune!!  Well done. ;D

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Geir

Hey ... yet another great song I've missed being kinda new here. This is a great song! Powerful vocalperformance. Having been in an 80/90s heavy rock band I can really appreciate the power of your voice. Great work.

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Oh well ........

Bluesberry

Wow what a vocal performance.  I agree with Ferryman, add some vocal harmonies on the chorus and this will be superb.  Great song.

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I love it man! You've even got the balls to record your own voice. Good confidence, I'll tell you what. Really good!

guitarron

very strong message-lets hope momentum can bring us back up-
good job


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