Nacho Cheese Hamburger Helper vs Metal

[Soldier-B]

I made this while waiting for some nacho cheese hamburger helper...so apparently being hungry makes me play metal. I'm still a beginner so don't mind the mistakes or the (nacho) cheesy intro 

[SE]

Nice bit of metal all you need is some sceaming vocal and a bass line and you,ll be there.

[Ferryman]

Pretty good, the minor glitches aren't noticeable - if you hadn't highlighted them, I wouldn't have noticed! Nice sound you've recorded there, just needs drums at least. Worthy of development.

BTW, as a Brit, I can only imagine what "nacho cheese hamburger helper" actually is, we don't have such things over here. But it sounds less than appetising (which is not what can be said of your work!).

Cheers,

Nigel

[Soldier-B]

Thanks for the kind words! I've been playing almost a year (self-taught) and I'm more or less trying to absorb as much as I can (from any genre).

As far as the hamburger helper goes Nigel, here's a link - http://www.generalmills.com/corporate/brands/product_image.aspx?catID=63&itemID=9544. FYI it definitely looks better than it tastes.

[lg]

Sounds to me like you're off to a good start!

Let's hear some more..

LG

[Guitar-Maniac]

Drums would make this a Killer Riff!
hope to hear more from u

[The Reverend 48]

Great so far  keep posting!

[Wiley]

I'm not a big metal person either, but drums and bass and I could get into it.  Add a vocal and you got a hit!!

[knniggits]

Cool riff 
You've got the makings of a good song. Keep going with this one.