In Need (poem song)

[allysonmarie]

Most of my songs are poems I've written and put to music. This is a recent recording.

If you let me know more
I will begin to see.
I'll be taken away;
I will begin to dream.

Desperate to distance myself from this grief,
We know I won't get what I want,
But I will always take what I need.

And your good soul has been waiting.
Your good soul says I'm worth saving...
You lift me up, over and through,
Never mind my unwillingness to move.

Never mind I've been using you to choose
What to do...what to do...what to do.
Nothing of myself is true – 

Never mind what to do.
We know I won't get what I want,
But I will always take what I need.

[Hook]

That's some serious soul you got going on. Very nice song, very nice performance.
Rock On!

[Groundy]

Nice song, and very well recorded. well done Allyson......Alex

[Redler]

Very nice vocal; dark and impressive! Well written song, as well!!

[SteveB]

A very powerful and uncompromising production.
A definite talent-to-watch. Well done AM. 

[Geir]

Powerful song in so many ways ! The music fits the words so well and it's a great performance!

You really should consider getting some slightly better recording device. Your songs deserve it !

[Jarle]

Soulful performance of a well written song.

[SwanSong]

hi Allyson and welcome to the forum .great vocals ..full of presence
modulation and breath control. very soulful singing.some of your
high notes were very dramatic. and a lot of dynamics into your singing
I agree though u should invest in some recording software if able.
and of course if u don't have audacity there is always the free version.
for about 69 dollars u can get sony audio pro . and mixcraft are all good
basic softwares. either way well done congrats keep sharing Neil.!

[danieldesete]

Nice to hear a new talented voice on the site. Welcome aboard, and please sent us many more musical poems,
daniel

[Bluesberry]

Really lovely, totally fantastic song.  I look forward to hearing what you come up with.  Fantastic songwriting, singing and piano.